hey guys, I'm kitsune060698, but because I'm new to the fanfic business, plus i like the name, you can call me kit. this is my first fanfiction, though I've read a lot. now here's the idea, i love reading a good fanfic with some mild character bashing, but i don't want my first fanfic to be anything like that. I also don't want any Japanese words that aren't used in the anime, except maybe hiraishin and the suffixes. sorry to anyone that thinks I'm copying them but i find some bits to be useful add-ins and put them with my story. I hope you like my story, so protocol:
"normal person talk"
normal person think
DEMON/SUMMON TALK
DEMON/SUMMON THINK
"possessed person talk"
Disclaimers:i do not own Naruto, i just write stories where Naruto is strong. although for inspiration the original is way better.
begin
Chapter 1:death and recreation
It was a bright and sunny day, and if one were to ride a boat then they would be stunned to see a bridge. But not just any bridge, this bridge was of massive proportions and still not yet finished. And a large section of it toward the end was shrouded in mist. In this mist was a battle who's outcome would affect the course of the world. Closer to the end of the bridge three figures stood of against a group of twelve.
One was difficult to describe, he was moderately tall, and his hair was silver and seemed to defy gravity with how it was standing. He had a face mask that covered the lower half of his face, a Bandana wrapped around his forehead with a piece of metal on it with an insignia similar to a leaf. running in a vertical line across his right eye was a scar. Said eye was a stark contrast to the deep black of the other. It was red, with a black ring running around the pupil, at regular intervals along this ring were three comma-like marks, all pointing outwards. he wore dark blue pants and an equally dark blue shirt with red, his torso covered by a green flak jacket. On each of his hands were a pair of fingerless gloves with metal plating on the back. He was Kakashi of the sharingan, jounin of the village hidden in the leaves, the copy-cat ninja, the man who had copied over a thousand jutsu.
The next was about the same height wearing almost identical attire , minus the mask and gloves, replacing that were bracelets and around his waist a sash signifying he was a former member of the guardian shinobi twelve. He had dark brown hair, spiky hair with sideburns and a goatee. He was Asuma Sarutobi. Son of the third Hokage and one of the few wind style users in the hidden leaf.
The third was a meduim sized woman with oddly red eyes, black hair and a more unusual garb. She appeared to be dressed in bandages that were adorned with thorn marks with her left arm covered by a red sleeve and her right sleeveless with bandages around her wrists. Also with a headband, just like the two the others had on her forehead. She was Kurenai Yuhi, genjutsu mistress of the village hidden in the leaves.
"Well Kakashi" said Asuma, his breathing heavy, just like the others, "it's a good thing you called us out, but it looks like this is our last mission". "I know Asuma, but I'm sorry i didn't teach those kids enough for them to live." Kakashi replied, "don't worry Kakashi" Kurenai comforted him "you taught them all you could, you were a good teacher."
"Charge" yelled one of the twelve jounin around him, how did this happen Kakashi thought.
-Flashback-
Gato stood over Zabuza, "well since you failed I guess I don't need you any more" he said reaching toward Him. Only to find his wrist broken by a very ticked off boy. "don't you dare touch Zabuza with your filthy hands" he snarled. The two thugs behind him were about to draw their swords only to find them drawn out and dropped on the ground, Haku standing in between the two of them. Gato fell back shivering in fear. "O-Okay, but your not going in their alone, i guess the Demon wasn't enough overkill, I'll send you some accomplices, you better get the Job done right." With that he fled for his life.
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"Zabuza Isn't Dead" Kakashi said, "and for safety I'm calling in the rest of the graduates of your year. Come on in guys" at the last part eight people walked in. Shikamaru Nara, "uh, what a drag, why cant you guys handle it" he complained, to this Kakashi explained "Shikamaru, we're calling you in because their is a prospect of this turning ugly." next in walked Ino Yamanaka, "Shikamaru, you're so lazy, hi guys". Next, Choji Akimichi *munch* *munch*. Asuma Sarutobi came in next with Kurenai and her team, Hinata, who just stuttered . Kiba, who loudly said that he and his team could do the mission themselves and didn't need other 'dead weight' teams slowing him down. And Shino...He didn't say anything.
"Okay guys" Kakashi said "as it is we may be unable to complete the mission, so i will be training you for the next week. So you better be ready." with that the week of tor-uh- training, began.
-Flashback end-
Oh, thats how it happened, Kakashi remembered. Just as all twelve of the rogue ninja that Gato had Hired were almost upon them a sudden explosion made every one stop. An explosion of red, bubbling, chakra.
-recently, elsewhere on the bridge-
Naruto stood shakily, and opened his eyes to a sight that he wished he never saw. In front of the three jounin that the rookie nine had been fighting lay eight motionless bodies, covered in senbon, battered, bruised and burnt. "Sakura-chan, Ino, Hinata" their they lay, the of their skin burnt, they had been fighting a fire style user. "Sasuke, Shino, Shikamaru" three almost unrecognizable form's lay their, that could only be described as human pincushion's with all the senbon that were sticking out of them. "Kiba, Choji" they were battered, bruised and broken, an obvious sign that their attacker was a taijutsu specialist. He closed his eyes wishing that it was all a dream, that he was somewhere else.
-mind scape-
He opened his eyes to see himself in a sewer, standing in ankle deep water, he saw, in the distance, a light. As he walked towards it he notices that their were two types of pipes in the sewer one glowing light blue while the other glowed orange-red, this is the strangest dream ever,he thought. He reached the source of the light. An enormous cage stood in front of him. Held closed by a piece of paper with the kanji for seal. As he wondered what was happening a deep menacing chuckle escaped from the cage. SO, MY JAILOR HAS FINALLY COME TO SEE ME, two giant, blood-red, slitted eyes opened along with a mouth that formed the visage of a terrifying grin. The light in the sewer brightened, revealing a giant fox with red fur, slit eyes, and nine tails. "y-you" Naruto stuttered, "you're the nine tailed fox." OH COME ON DON'T CALL ME THAT, IT MAKES ME FEEL WEIRD, CALL ME KURAMA, AND THE REASON I CALLED YOU HERE WAS BECAUSE I WANTED TO HELP YOU SAVE YOUR FRIENDS the now named Kurama growled."y-you can do that?" Naruto's hopes rose. YES, YOU HAVE EARNED MY RESPECT KIT. BUT IT WILL COME AT A PRICE, YOU MUST TEAR OFF HALF THE SEAL. "seal?" Naruto wondered. YES, THE PIECE OF PAPER OF THE BARS, the fox said a very large sweat drop forming on the back of its head. Without a second thought Naruto, desperate to save his friends climbed up the bar's and tore half the piece of paper off. WE WILL TALK LATER, THE FOX SAID, AS NARUTO FADED FROM HIS MIND-SCAPE.
-real world-
The jounin stared in horror as a huge amount of red chakra started pouring off of the young blonde. Forming a shape that could only be describes as nine tails of chakra behind him. Then suddenly eight of the nine, tail-like extensions of chakra jumped off of the kid and flowed in to the eight, almost dead people around him. The ninth then did something unexpected. It charged the three ninja. The boy known as Haku managed to escape but the other to were swallowed in the burning red mass. The the chakra cleared the two were standing there, seemingly unharmed, when suddenly they fell, knocked out. Had Hinata have watched with her byakugan, she would have seen that their entire chakra network was made useless, flooded with the corrosive chakra, and barely able to have any chakra in it.
Naruto looked up at Haku, his eyes perfect slits, and blood red. He let out an ear splitting grin. "Boo"
end
so yeah, new here, don't flame too badly. I'm excited and want to publish my first chapter so sorry if it's short. no pairing in this as far as i can tell. if their are any problems with the reading I'm sorry, I'm just stumbling slightly cluelessly around here. Good grammar rules and i hope to perfect it, unfortunately this program doesn't automatically add capitals to the beginning of sentences or the word 'I'. do not flame me for using things that are seen in other plots. I add a little bit of this and a little bit of that and I don't have the patience to ask every author about it and wait for a response. plus I'm not even copying anything from the storyline, just little bits here and there if anything.