So here is my first fanfic *yayyyy*
Note: This is an updated version because I noticed it left out the dialogue oops
The blood splattered the molten hot coal. Sweeping my dress to behind me, I make my way to the dauntless, keeping my gaze away from the sea of red and yellow, and my parents.
I knew that I could never be Amity. I just never thought where I would end up. Particularly Dauntless. Maybe it was just the spur of the moment. Maybe it was fate. I will never know.
Things changed a lot after the Dauntless went under the simulation eight years ago. Jeanine Matthews was given the death sentence, as well as her close followers, for example Eric. They were just vague details I was able to collect at school with nobody noticing. I've always had an interest like the Erudite. I would of done well there, but it's too late anyway. Dauntless priorities have changed drastically, so intiation has to be different. Or so I've been told.
Soon, we're running up the stairs and jumping on the train. I don't notice much as all I can notice is the adrenaline pulsing through my veins. Amity didn't allow for this to happen. Everything was just so slow. Was. I like the sound of 'was'! It reminds me of the future; and everything that is happening now. Faction before blood. I'll live with that.
When the other initiates start jumping off the train, I do too. There is an opening in the centre of the building, and right by it, a Dauntless leader is standing there. He says "Your entrance to Dauntless is down there. Good luck." So that's part of intiation.
Behind me, someone screams.
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