Arrow In Your Heart
This is another fanfic I'm writing with no future. Squall finds out what Rinoa is doing, and tries to heal his wounds. I don't know how it's going to turn out either. It contains Rinoa bashing. All flames welcome since I learn from those...
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He brushed his hair out of his eyes. The wind blew and it reminded him of her. The moment when she turned around with her hair flowing with the wind. She was beautiful. He wanted to run to her and hold her and tell her everything was okay. But she was a sorceress. She couldn't meet anyone. She became the experiences of the scientists. He couldn't bear at the thought. He sighed deeply. A hand touched his shoulder gently. He turned around fast drawing his gunblade. It was Quistis.
"I know you miss Rinoa, Squall... And I wanted to give you some advice."
"What kind of..?"
"Don't end up like me. Don't be afraid to hide your feelings. Go."
That was like a signal for Squall. He nodded and ran past her to where Rinoa was. He swore he'd protect her, and he was going to keep his word. He tried to open the laboratory door, but it was locked tightly. He took his gunblade out and slashed it. It broke in half almost right after it touched the lock. There he saw surprised scientists.
"Where is she?"
He grabbed the shirt of the scientist and spat out. He stammered back.
"You..you.. m..mean Sorceress R..Rinoa? Sh..she broke out and r..ran away.."
Squall dropped the scientist in surprise. Why hadn't Rinoa tell him?
"When did she? How? Why? Answer me NOW!"
"About 2 days ago.. Sh..she said she wanted to have a clean new life."
The Scientist straightened his lab coat. He sounded braver now. Squall gritted his teeth. Was she possessed?
"Was she possessed?"
"No. It was her own will."
Squall's lip and eye twitched violently. He ran out of the laboratory and ran few feet when he collasped. He shook so vigorously that the ground was shaking with him. He had to search for her. Then he noticed a familiar dog. It was Angelo. He should know where Rinoa is. Squall waited for the dog to approach him. He gave it some treat and a pet. He soothed the dog to get used to him.
"Good to see you again, Angelo. Do you know where Rinoa might be?"
Angelo whined. It seemed he knew, but he didn't want to tell. Squall almost slashed the dog with his gunblade, but stopped himself. He had to get the information out of the dog. Without the dog, he couldn't find Rinoa.
"Now now come on. You can tell me. I won't tell Rinoa that you told me."
The dog whined again, and barked. It tugged at Squall's pants and ran. Squall ran after it. After running for few minutes, the dog stopped in Balamb hotel. Tilting his head wondering why Rinoa would be here, he decided that Rinoa must be taking a rest here to come to Balamb soon. The hotel clerk looked at him up and down, and she smiled.
"I'd like to see which room Rinoa Heartilly is staying please."
He demanded in a commanding voice. It wasn't a question. The hotel clerk answered,
"Wow, a fifth one. Well well well... upstairs room number 24."
Squall scowled. First of all, she was trying to hit on him. He mumbled a thanks and went up to the room. He wondered what the clerk meant that he was the fifth one. He opened the door without knocking, and there, he saw something he shouldn't have. Rinoa was pinned against the wall, and another guy was leaving a trail of kisses down her neck. What hurt him more was that Rinoa didn't show any resistance, and she seemed to even enjoy it. Rinoa was the first one to notice Squall.
"Hey Squall.. wanna join?"
Squall couldn't resist his anger. She had cheated on him with another guy. Another guy who looked much uglier than him. Rinoa giggled. It rang in Squall's ear. HE drew his gunblade and was about to slash the guy when Rinoa screamed.
"No! don't do it!"
She held on to Squall's arm, trying to stop him. The guy hurriedly put his clothes on and threw the gils to Rinoa.
"What the hell is going on? I'm leaving. Here's your stupid money."
He left through the door, leaving Rinoa and Squall alone. Rinoa quickly gathered the money and put it in the drawer. She didn't seem to feel sorry or anything.
"How could you do this to me? Why?"
Rinoa put her clothes on and replied casually,
"Well, first, I needed money. Also I didn't like your shy style. I need a new life. I want to go somewhere where no one knows that I'm a sorceress."
Squall's mouth hung open. He suddenly had a strong urge to kill her. He tried to calm down, but couldn't stop his hand from shaking.
"You don't know what you did to me. How could you after all this... You just shot an arrow through my heart.. leaving me with wound that will never heal."
Rinoa shrugged and packed her things. Suddenly she lifted her head and asked.
"Of course this rumor is bound to spread.. But how did you know I was here?"
Just then Angelo walked in, its eyes avoiding the owner's. Rinoa looked angry.
"Wha..? You bitch. You promised you won't tell anyone where I was! Get the hell out of my sight."
She kicked Angelo deliberately and left.
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I don't like how this fanfic's going. I wrote it and even I don't like it. I'll just read the reviews and decide what I'm going to do with it...
This is another fanfic I'm writing with no future. Squall finds out what Rinoa is doing, and tries to heal his wounds. I don't know how it's going to turn out either. It contains Rinoa bashing. All flames welcome since I learn from those...
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He brushed his hair out of his eyes. The wind blew and it reminded him of her. The moment when she turned around with her hair flowing with the wind. She was beautiful. He wanted to run to her and hold her and tell her everything was okay. But she was a sorceress. She couldn't meet anyone. She became the experiences of the scientists. He couldn't bear at the thought. He sighed deeply. A hand touched his shoulder gently. He turned around fast drawing his gunblade. It was Quistis.
"I know you miss Rinoa, Squall... And I wanted to give you some advice."
"What kind of..?"
"Don't end up like me. Don't be afraid to hide your feelings. Go."
That was like a signal for Squall. He nodded and ran past her to where Rinoa was. He swore he'd protect her, and he was going to keep his word. He tried to open the laboratory door, but it was locked tightly. He took his gunblade out and slashed it. It broke in half almost right after it touched the lock. There he saw surprised scientists.
"Where is she?"
He grabbed the shirt of the scientist and spat out. He stammered back.
"You..you.. m..mean Sorceress R..Rinoa? Sh..she broke out and r..ran away.."
Squall dropped the scientist in surprise. Why hadn't Rinoa tell him?
"When did she? How? Why? Answer me NOW!"
"About 2 days ago.. Sh..she said she wanted to have a clean new life."
The Scientist straightened his lab coat. He sounded braver now. Squall gritted his teeth. Was she possessed?
"Was she possessed?"
"No. It was her own will."
Squall's lip and eye twitched violently. He ran out of the laboratory and ran few feet when he collasped. He shook so vigorously that the ground was shaking with him. He had to search for her. Then he noticed a familiar dog. It was Angelo. He should know where Rinoa is. Squall waited for the dog to approach him. He gave it some treat and a pet. He soothed the dog to get used to him.
"Good to see you again, Angelo. Do you know where Rinoa might be?"
Angelo whined. It seemed he knew, but he didn't want to tell. Squall almost slashed the dog with his gunblade, but stopped himself. He had to get the information out of the dog. Without the dog, he couldn't find Rinoa.
"Now now come on. You can tell me. I won't tell Rinoa that you told me."
The dog whined again, and barked. It tugged at Squall's pants and ran. Squall ran after it. After running for few minutes, the dog stopped in Balamb hotel. Tilting his head wondering why Rinoa would be here, he decided that Rinoa must be taking a rest here to come to Balamb soon. The hotel clerk looked at him up and down, and she smiled.
"I'd like to see which room Rinoa Heartilly is staying please."
He demanded in a commanding voice. It wasn't a question. The hotel clerk answered,
"Wow, a fifth one. Well well well... upstairs room number 24."
Squall scowled. First of all, she was trying to hit on him. He mumbled a thanks and went up to the room. He wondered what the clerk meant that he was the fifth one. He opened the door without knocking, and there, he saw something he shouldn't have. Rinoa was pinned against the wall, and another guy was leaving a trail of kisses down her neck. What hurt him more was that Rinoa didn't show any resistance, and she seemed to even enjoy it. Rinoa was the first one to notice Squall.
"Hey Squall.. wanna join?"
Squall couldn't resist his anger. She had cheated on him with another guy. Another guy who looked much uglier than him. Rinoa giggled. It rang in Squall's ear. HE drew his gunblade and was about to slash the guy when Rinoa screamed.
"No! don't do it!"
She held on to Squall's arm, trying to stop him. The guy hurriedly put his clothes on and threw the gils to Rinoa.
"What the hell is going on? I'm leaving. Here's your stupid money."
He left through the door, leaving Rinoa and Squall alone. Rinoa quickly gathered the money and put it in the drawer. She didn't seem to feel sorry or anything.
"How could you do this to me? Why?"
Rinoa put her clothes on and replied casually,
"Well, first, I needed money. Also I didn't like your shy style. I need a new life. I want to go somewhere where no one knows that I'm a sorceress."
Squall's mouth hung open. He suddenly had a strong urge to kill her. He tried to calm down, but couldn't stop his hand from shaking.
"You don't know what you did to me. How could you after all this... You just shot an arrow through my heart.. leaving me with wound that will never heal."
Rinoa shrugged and packed her things. Suddenly she lifted her head and asked.
"Of course this rumor is bound to spread.. But how did you know I was here?"
Just then Angelo walked in, its eyes avoiding the owner's. Rinoa looked angry.
"Wha..? You bitch. You promised you won't tell anyone where I was! Get the hell out of my sight."
She kicked Angelo deliberately and left.
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I don't like how this fanfic's going. I wrote it and even I don't like it. I'll just read the reviews and decide what I'm going to do with it...