I wrote this after i read Nnoitra's death, this is supposed to be his last thoughts. My first language is spanish so sorry for any mistakes. This is the first time i write a fanfic, so i would gladly hear any advice, and specially any opinion of this short text.
Just in case i will refresh your memories about Nnoitras's death. Nnoitra was dying on the floor, Neliel was in her chibi form, so she didnt remember him, Nnoitra looked at her, and then she said his name, and… he died while looking into her eyes. She cried.
The last breath was coming closer and closer, the end was tangible, just one look before you go, hate is just another manifestation of passion, it is not surprising that sometimes the line that divides it from the love disappears, her name leaving his lips was reassuring, like the last goodbye. He could only continue watching her because it was really the only view that was worth, she was his forever eternal enemy, even that who had taken his life with a sword could never compare to her, so he had to look into her eyes and enjoy one more time, for the last time, the hatred he profesed, the hatred that made him feel so good, can hatred makes you feel good?, that does not matter anymore, her eyes are looking him and he can already go, knowing that the tears wont delay their apparition on that hated face, and he could enjoy one more time for the last time of having caused pain to her heart, because that's what really made him feel alive, even in the death.
C'est fini
The original story belongs to whoever did write it, and this is just a fanfic based in that story.