Hey all
This was my first fan ficiton story, and now... ive improved it! yay, a remake of my old story. Please review... please? this story didnt get many, im hoping for more now, since this was my first it hink now that im into my other i can improve this one. Maybe....
please review! :D
Ive tried to fix some spelling!
Goddess95 :D
PROLOUGE
"All these years"
A voice boomed through the cracked walls of dust that sheltered him from the outside world.
"All these years"
He circled the fountain pool, the murky green water swimming round in circles as ripples formed through images.
"Well, NO MORE!"
He said as he thrashed his hand through the water. The image faded and was taken over by ripples of green water. His minions stood afar back, biting their nails nervously as their bulky legs wobbled and quivered like in a blizzard. Their eyes of dread and full of plea, shadowed in the darkness, eyed the furious man they called their master. Dread the day they called him King. If ever.
"AND YOU"
He pointed to the gang of egg head shaped pathetic excuses for minions, huddled ina corner as they shook like a hurricane. His finger out stretched, a zap of magic burst from his layer of skin and landed square between the eyes of one of his minions, a minion that was no more than now dust and ashes.
"This has gone on far long enough!" he screamed as the earth rumbled and the rocks crumbled at his feet. He bent down and picked a rock, and observed it carefully. His eye twitched and his lip quivered ferociously before throwing the rock into the murky water in his pool. He looked over at the image lay out through the ripples and sinking rock, as it disappeared magically through the deep water.
"Perfect."
