REWRITTEN 8/8/17

I am not Pittacus Lore all characters in this chapter belong to him! RR AND ENJOY!

John POV

Everything on the other line goes silent I can hear the phone fall. "Sarah?" I ask "SARAH?"

I hear Adam's voice

"John I'm so sorry. Sarah's gone."

"No. NO!"

I hang up the phone and start crying. Sam walks in.

"John what's wrong? What happened?"

"It's Sarah." I reply "She's gone."

"Sam stares at me, tears in his eyes. I sometimes forget that he knew Sarah before I did and that he also had a pretty strong friendship with her. He hugs me and we just stay there for awhile crying, not saying anything.

Just then we hear screaming from outside. We go out and see tons of bodies on the ground some of them unmoving. I'm alert looking for Mogs. I hear a voice coming out of a van, I point a gun at it, but nothing is there

"You have killed our beloved leader!" rings out a female voice which I assumes belongs to a Mog. " Now we will make you pay! We killed number one in Malaysia, number two in England, number three in Kenya and number eight in the everglades! Now we will kill each of you. One. By. One!"

Before I even have a chance to think about what has just been said, what has happened, everything turns black.

Six POV

I lay on my metal table, silent due to... well who knows what... Marina, the only healer on the ship is passed out, so I have no choice but to lay there.

Thoughts race through my head.

Is he dead? Did we win? Is it over?

I suddenly become aware of my surroundings, Mark is crying, Sarah lays still on a metal table similar to mine.

Oh no. She's dead. Because of me. I didn't save her.

Sarah and I were never the best of friends, but that doesn't stop the silent tears that stream from my eyes.

Marina's eyes begin to open. She groans in pain aftafter the brutal battle we just fought. She attempts to sit up, but immediately goes back down because of the pain. I've felt that pain many times before.

Adam walks over to her. He gives her some water and after a little bit he helps her sit up. She walks over to me shakily and heals me just to the point where I can talk. She is low on energy so that is all she can afford to do.

I stay silent because I know that if I talk my guilt over Sarah will come streaming out. Instead I give a slight thumbs up to signify that I'm okay.

Adam fills Marina in about Sarah's death and despite her mild relationship with Sarah she also begins to cry.

We move Sarah to an empty chair and sit in silence thinking about the major battle that just went down. When all of the sudden the skimmer starts humming and shaking, we all look alarmed when all of the sudden Mark collapses.

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