Perfection is a flaw.

A/N: my seventh story, please r&r and if you like it, please read my other stories.

Disclaimer: Nothing is what i own.


"Evans, don't walk away from me! You know you love me! You do!" James yelled at the top pf his lungs as Lily Evans walked away from him. Suddenly, she stopped and turned around, she walked back to him, and they became closer and closer.

"Why do you want me so much? Why won't you leave me alone?" She asked quietly

"Because; you're the one thing I want and the one thing I can't have. Lily, the reason I want you is because you're perfect."

"Perfection is a flaw." Lily said, she smiled then walked away, leaving James standing there; whenever she smiled it made his knees weak. She didn't understand that he wanted her because he actually liked her, not because she was pretty.


They were in seventh year, James had kept count; he had asked her out 723 times, and he had been rejected 732 times; because sometimes when he would walk up to her, she would say no before he had even opened his mouth.

"James, why are you standing in the corridor, alone?" Sirius said as he walked up to James, "Evans reject you again? Oh well, plenty more fish in the sea."

"Lily, is the only fish for me. And don't refer to her a fish!" James said "She is a delicate flower who is bound to fall in love with me any day now, after all we do share the Head's common room."

"James, you are completely clueless. Go grab yourself a girlfriend." Sirius laughed

"Ok."

"Great, I need a new one too, let's go shopping!" Sirius said

"Good idea!" James laughed; Marauder shopping was not like shopping that girls do where they buys clothes and make-up and accessories. No, Marauder shopping was where they would stroll through the school, or Hogsmeade, and they would look at the selection of girls, and then they would finally ask one lucky girl out.

James was always very picky, because in his point of view, they weren't as perfect as Lily. The girl clung on to Sirius' arm and giggled at everything he said, her name was Kimmy.

"James, would you just pick one?" Sirius whined, causing Kimmy to let out a high-pitched laugh.

"Fine." He sighed as he walked up to a blonde girl with blue eyes.

"Hey, I'm James."

"I know; I'm Jill."

"Do you want to go with me to Hogsmeade some time?" he said reluctantly

"Hell yeah!" she said excitedly

James threw his arm around her, and him, Sirius and their new girls walked off down the corridor.


Lily was on her way to the bathroom when she heard a high-pitched laugh, making her jump.

"Fine, hey I'm James."

"I know; I'm Jill."

Lily stopped and hid around the corner from where the conversation was going on.

"Do you want to go with me to Hogsmeade some time?"

"Hell yeah."

Lily felt a pang of jealousy, but why? It was just Potter and Black shopping for new bimbos as usual. For some reason a little voice in the back of her head was screaming

I hate her, why does James have to go out with her? Stupid slut bimbo whore.

But there was a much louder voice in her head yelling Lily, hello? Are you utterly and completely mad? Hello? It's Potter, he's tortured you for the last seven years!

She came out from her corner, and sighed. She must be going loopy; maybe it was all the time she was spending in the Head's common room with the Marauders.


"So James, what do you think?" Sirius said

"She's hot, but she's no Lily."

"Lily Schmily, James, three words, get over her." Sirius said

"I don't think I can. She's perfect."


A/N: Next chapter soon, i hope! But i want at least 5 reviews before then!