hi this is my first fanfiction so don't judge. r&r.

chapter 1:

"hey Ride" said the biggest pain in my butt coming up behind me. " GO away Martinez?" i said calmly. " what you don't the hottest guy in this school by you" he replied cockly. " what i don't remeber any guy in this school being hot and why would i want a pig by me?" i said to him as i turned around to face him. Now a few kids have stopped to listen as they usally do, it is a daily thing. Alright how about we back up here My names Maximum Ride but i g by Max nothing else they people who have, have gone to the hospital. I have two sisters Ella and Angel. Ella is in the grade under me im in 10th grade. Angel i 3 years old and in preschool. then i have my bestfriends James (Iggy) Martinez same grade loves bombs and even though hes blind an awsome cook way better then me. Monique (Nudge) Martinez Iggy's sister shes in the same grade as Ella and her best friend. also one major thing about my best friend Iggy he's brothers with my enemy. now you might want to no wh he is well im nt telling you just yet. " I am not a pig and you no it. your telling me you don't like me ride?" he wisphered into my ear. i tried to move back but ran into a wall great. " sorry Martinez i dont and never will" i said but couldnt help the blush that came onto my cheaks he was just to close. i will admit he is hot but hes a total player. Hes also the captian of the boys basketball team im captian of the girls. " not true ride and ill prove it to you" he said then started t lean forword right when he was about to kiss my lips eck. Iggy my savoir came to the rescue " YO Fang whats up mom wants us home in 15 minutes." iggy said this and winked at meor at lest ried he missed me by a few feet. "Yeah coming Ig" Fang said. " we're not done here ride" he said walking away. i called after him " you wish martinez". he just turned around and shrugged " maybe" he replied and walked away. what was that i asked myself all the way home.

hey what did you think is it good or not. R&R i no its short but i wanted to see if it was good enough to continue.

-FANGANDMAX-