This is my first story so please review to say what needs changing. I take all reviews good and bad, except 4 spam.
Thalia P.O.V.
"Come on! I dared you now do it"
"No, Percy! They'll murder me!"
Thalia made a dash for the door, but Nico and Annabeth blocked the door. She went for the window, but Travis blocked it.
"Seriously, all you have to do is take the stinkbomb and throw it in the Ares cabin then run!" said Percy.
"But they've developed a celestial bronze bazooka!"
"So? They'll just murder the first sap they see."
"Fine! May Alecto curse your souls" She took the box and stormed out of the Zeus cabin. A few moments passed. Then there was a BOOOOOOM!
And a horrid stench filled the air, and a choking Thalia crawled in to the cabin. "Done it!" Percy looked outside. "Oh my gods! Guys! Phobos and Deimos have come and they look ANGRY!"
A red glow bathed the camp. "If its stink war you wimps want its stink war you get!" a loud deep voice roared.
