Since That Day II

Sarah

Both were ice,

Yet warm as spring;

Were the windows

To her dream.

Her clothing torn

Her pride was shot

She wished he would

Kiss her a lot.

Her head spun

As she said the line

She didn't mean it

And almost cried.

As he laughed

And seemed so warm

She ran and jumped

Into his arms.

He was as warm

As she had thought

She didn't want

To leave that spot.

He smiled at her

And held her close

And carried her

Into unknown.

He asked her hand

That next may

They've been one

Since that day

It could use some work, but how is it so far? Should I change anything? R&R?