I guess I lied when I said I would probably never write another poem (a
note in my personal poem, THE ROSE). Well, this came to me today, and so I
wrote it down. I think it's okay, so I'll post it up. This is a
combination of Kari's view and my view of life. We have very similar
characteristics; it's almost scary.
1.1 KARI'S POEM
I'm sweet, I'm innocent,
I'm pretty and popular.
I'm happy, so it seems.
I'm light, not dark.
I'm weak, not strong.
What you see is not me.
I hurt, I'm guilt,
I'm controlled by darkness.
This is me, can't you see?
Light can be weak.
This is me, can't you see?
What do you think?
Do you know me?
Do I know myself?
Am I light, or am I dark?
Time can tell, and time is cheap.
Life is bad, death is good, is this true?
Don't know, but light is me, and I am weak.
So maybe dark and death is better than light and life.
WHAT do you think? PLEASE review!!!
1.1 KARI'S POEM
I'm sweet, I'm innocent,
I'm pretty and popular.
I'm happy, so it seems.
I'm light, not dark.
I'm weak, not strong.
What you see is not me.
I hurt, I'm guilt,
I'm controlled by darkness.
This is me, can't you see?
Light can be weak.
This is me, can't you see?
What do you think?
Do you know me?
Do I know myself?
Am I light, or am I dark?
Time can tell, and time is cheap.
Life is bad, death is good, is this true?
Don't know, but light is me, and I am weak.
So maybe dark and death is better than light and life.
WHAT do you think? PLEASE review!!!
