Hi! ok! this is a revised edition to the crappy story i posted a few years ago...yes i know the first one was terrible. Thank you to all of the people that told me because without that encouragement i would not have gotten off of my lazy butt to write a better version of it. i'm pretty sure they are OOC. i'm sorry about that but i'm tired and i am NOT writing it over again! here's what i got...
A depressed looking Cindy opened the door. "Hi." she said…knowing full well why he was there.
"Look I have only one thing to say to you. We're over." He started to walk away.
"Neutron! Why can't you just listen to me for once?" A young blonde Cindy Vortex yelled as she ran off her front porch.
"Because. I just…well I guess I just thought you loved me more than this and well the thought of reliving that moment is just too hard for me…" Jimmy Neutron forcefully replied to her…Jimmy was a handsome (well sexy boy in Cindy's POV) in the 12th grade. He was a genius and could be very stubborn at times.
"Well can you just wait a minute and let me explain?" said Cindy calming down.
"Fine!" he snarled. Cindy was also in the 12th grade although not quite a genius she was still extremely smart. As the two sat down on Cindy's front porch, Cindy began to explain.
"You see Jimmy I didn't want to do that…I mean come on you're a great guy! Why would I want to do that to you?" tears started forming in her eyes as the memory of last night hunted her soul.
(Flashback)
It all started when Jimmy had finally gotten up the guts to ask Cindy out and they were finally going out. Things were great at first but then they started arguing, and their relationship started to crumble. The worst part is, that they would argue over the dumbest things, like who got better grades or who was looking at who, and it just seemed to fall apart as quickly as it had started. Then 2 months later on Nick had come to visit Cindy while Jimmy was away on an extended trip to mars.
-Ding-dong-
"Coming!!" yelled Cindy. "Um…hi Nick what are you doing here?"
"I just decided to drop by to tell you something…" he swooped her up into his arms and kissed her passionately, and before she could even try to get him off of her Jimmy appeared in the door way with a dozen red roses and a beautifully wrapped gift.
"Cindy?" he asked in an astonished tone…as he dropped the package and roses…
"Jimmy!" she turned to Nick and pushed him away with all of her strength.
"How could you?" Hot tears were stinging his cheeks as he turned around and ran in no particular direction. He just knew he had to get away from the horrible site he just witnessed.
"I hate you! You bastard! You are ruining everything!" She screamed at Nick.
"Come ON! You don't really want to be with that freak do you?" He asked trying to grab her arm.
"First of all he's not a freak, and second of all yes I do want to be with him! Forever!" she again pushed him away.
"Whatever…"
As he stalked off, Cindy went and picked up the package and roses, and sat right in the middle of her porch and cried. Everything she and Jimmy had was now gone, and unless she could save it, it would be lost forever
Later that night she finally came around to opening the package and in it she found a pearl necklace and an engagement ring and she just cried harder until her tears finally put her to sleep…then the next night he went over to her house to officially end their relationship…
(End Flashback)
Cindy began to cry. She would do anything to be in his arms right now.
"How could you kiss him?!" he said as he began to pace.
"Correction! I didn't kiss him he kissed me!" she said staring him down.
"Well by the looks of it you were enjoying it!" he stopped to glare at her.
"How could you say that? You are the only one I love with all my heart! I just wish you knew that. Oh yeah, I found the engagement ring."
Jimmy's eyes were turning slightly pink. "Well you know what? I did want to marry you! Correction, I still want to marry you but…"
"But what?" she asked confused and a bit hopeful.
"I don't know if I can now. Obviously I'm not good enough for you."
" That's not true at all!!" she said reaching for his hands.
"Well you sure fooled me!" he pushed her hands away and turned towards his house.
"Jimmy wait. Please?"
As he looked back at her and she could see the deep sorrow in his eyes, but just as the moment came it was taken away.
"Jimmy! Look out!"
Cindy started running to try and save him, but it was too late. Just as he stepped out into the road a car swerved around the corner and hit him dead on. With that Cindy yelled to her mom to call and ambulance and she rushed out to Jimmy and amazingly he was still alive and conscious. He could only get out a few words before passing out.
"I'm sorry. I still love you. Remember, J + C forever." He smiled a bit. Then he fell unconscious.
ok...if you still feel the need to flame me that's fine go ahead and do it but please keep the heat around medium...and if you are going to flame me send me a Message about it please instead of posting it on here...unless you're just lazy and don't feel like it...then i guess just post it like normal. to those of you that like my story..."Rock on!" i'll post more once i know it's not complete crap.
