we give this a go yes?

my first fanfiction so XD yeah prob bad

Blood Blood was everywhere everywhere he looked the walls the celling the doors windows there wasent a single spot left without the presence of blood he dident understand it where where was it he smelled it but coudent see it he got dressed and hurryed out he coudent stay there as soon as he was out the door he stopped he smelled it was even worse outside 'what is going on with me' he thought 'why doese everything smell like blood' he ran ran as fast as he coude he needed to get out of the town he was near the edge of town when someone stopped him *hey you whats wrong you look like you've seen a ghost* the mann said he turned around 'it smells diffrent' *sorry its just my nose it hurts really bad and i saw some plants that woude ease the pain earlier* he lied he needed to get out of this town *alright but be carefull theres a monster out there some kind of beast be carefull out there*
the man said he ran out in to the forest 'the smell its stopped' he looked around he dident smell any blood he smelled trees leaves grass it felt so peacefull out here suddenly another smell caught his nose he was on edge he heard walking something was coming towards him he looked around but saw nothing 'what is that' he thought *hello is anyone there?*
silence *human how did you know i was here?* he looked around for the owner of the voice but saw nothing *i-i i smelled you and heard you walking* again silence *you smelled me? how did you manage to smell me* ...* i-i dont know look il leave right now if you dont want me here* suddenly an arrow hit between his feet he fell to the ground and looked around in a panic *hey look i dont want no trouble il leave right away* he tried to get up to leave another arrow hit right above his head * you will not move human* *ok easy easy i wont leave just pls no more arrows*
he felt tears swell up in his eyes 'so this is how its gona end for me killed without even knowing my killer' suddenly he heard steps he looked up and saw a dark mask *why havent you killed me yet*
*who said i was going to kill you?* the person asked he looked up at the person 'blue eyes' he thought *you have blue eyes* he blurted out the person took a step back 'why is he afraid?' he thought *i do yes* the person said this time when the person spoke he noted that it sounded more femenin 'its a girl' he thought *your a girl?* *yes i am why is that confusing?* she sounded a little irritated *nonono its just i thought you were a mann* * you are an intersting human human* *what do you meane? human arent you human aswell?* she laughed he looked at her *w-w-what whats funny?* he asked she looked him in the eyes and said *you*