(Hi everyone this is my first Star Wars story. I hope you enjoy it, please give me feedback or tell me if I missed anything up. Also if you like your character to be in the story do let me know.)
Chapter # 1
An Imperial ship flew across the peaceful quite space, it was caring two inquisitors. It was heading for a planet called Harken; it was a lovely tropical planet. It was controlled by the Galactic Empire, but lately the military forces were dealing with an annoying group of cartels. On this very ship sat one of the inquisitors. His name was The Eleventh Brother, but he hated to be called that. Instead he likes to be called by his name. That his mother gave him, it is Drakon. He came from a clan that hunt down dragons, that's why his mother gave him that name in order to be a great dragon hunter. Fate had it that he became an inquisitor instead; he however wears his Grand dragon hunter outfit. He wears a regular mandalorian helmet, without the antenna. It's covered by his jacket; the jacket is sleeveless on the right side and cut short on the left side, the jacket is black and brown. It's black on the outside and brown on the inside, on the jacket's collar is fur.
He wears a green shirt and black pants, he wears gauntlets. He has on black and silver combat boots; his left arm is wrapped up with a red wrap, it goes underneath the gantlet. He has blue armor on him with a purple glow; he has it on his kneepads, shoulder pads, shoes and even on his shoes. His left Gauntlet also has fur on it; his right arm however is a different story. It's completely cybernetic and has twin purple kyber crystals powering it. There's also a green blade near his blue claw fingers, in order to stab people with. His right shoulder also has three energy spikes at the back; the ones on the side are purple, while the one in the middle is green. On his shoulders is one purple spike on each side, his right arm had a silver dragon statue on it. The dragon's head is looking to the right, while breathing fire and has its wings open.
Drakon sighed, because he did not want to be here. He had to come or the real truth was force to come by the grand Inquisitor. Drakon heard about the grand inquisitor's death and never been the happiest in his life, he was glade that the grand inquisitor was dead. Of course he locked it deep inside of him. He really hated that guy, but here they are. On a mission and the reason they came here is because, there is a person here with force sensitivity. Both inquisitors are here to either kill the person or make him an ally. Drakon looks outside again as the ship descends on this planet surface. It was raining; Drakon looks at the rain drops as they hit the window. Rain was one of Drakon's favorite things, second to stuffing his face. It reminded him of his home planet. Drakon felt someone's anger and smiled under the helmet, Twelve Brother comes to him and Drakon pretends to not to hear him. Drakon then felt a kick to his boot and he turns to twelve. He keeps himself from cracking up.
"Yes?" Drakon says. Twelve glares at him and points to his outfit. "Did you do this?" Twelve asked Drakon. Twelve's suit was colored bright pink and had flowers on it. Drakon was proud with his work, but played it off like he didn't. He did it at the time with other Inquisitors, so he'll use that.
"No I did not do it, it was probably Emily"-Drakon said. That was probably true, she had done it before. Twelve sighs. "Once I get back, I'm gonna teach her a lesson." Twelve leaves the room and once Drakon felt him on the other side of the ship, he lets out a laugh. After sitting for a while, Drakon felt the ship land and he gets up from his seat. He walks to the ramp and leaves the ship, alongside with Twelve. They're both immediately greeted with a whole lot of storm troopers and Commanders. Both Twelve and Drakon walk towards the leader of this base, while the walk there. Drakon could feel the soldiers trying not to laugh and Twelve frustration. Drakon was glade, he hates for his own people to fear him. His enemies can fear him, but not his people. Yet another thing he keeps deep within himself. It helps protect him and still be a human being. Once they got a stepping distance to the leader, the leader introduces him to them.
"Hello Inquisitors, welcome to my humble base. My name is George Stone." George says to Drakon and Twelve. "Give me the report Admiral George." Twelve says George nods his head." Yes Inquisitor, three weeks ago a group from the cartel came here. At first they were small, but they grew pretty large really fast. However we did not worry, they left us alone and even tried to trade with us. Then on the second week however, they attack us; one of their people had a lightsaber. He used a little bit of the force."-George says to Drakon and Twelve, once all three got into the command center. "I sent some scours to scout the area. They came back with this." George tells the two inquisitors. He pressed a button and a screen came up showing the enemy's hide out. It was surprisingly a castle like place. There were photos of the defences, offence and even some weak spots. The last photo showed s cartel member with a yellow lightsaber.
"What we gathered is that this man is named Malfoy and is addicted to death sticks. It's a new drup that's around. "George says. Drakon and Twelve look at each other, they node at the same time and this time Drakon spoke up. "I'm hoping you have a plan to get us into that castle?" -Drakon asks George. George nods his head "Yes we do sir." He points at the screen. "Two groups, one well attack from the south, while the other attacks the north. The third group and along with you two well sneak into the castle."-George said. Twelve nods his head. "Good, good." Twelve says and he looks at Drakon. "I reckon you get some rest, you're probably going need it." Twelve says to Drakon.
After that, Twelve leaves the room. Drakon looks at George and gives him a small bow. Drakon then leaves to go to his ready room; he stops at the food cafeteria to stuff his face, while looking at the time food. Drakon could feel people starting at him and since the storm trooper near him wanted to ask a question. "Yes?"- Drakon says to the storm trooper. The storm trooper's eyes widened a little bit, but he spoke any ways.
"I heard you guys were pretty scary, people fear you. However why is the other Inquisitor wearing pink and flowers?"-Storm trooper asks Drakon.
Drakon smiled behind his mask "Well that's because he's faaabuuulooooouuuse." Drakon says to the storm trooper. Drakon opens his arms wide and all animated like. Just trying to be silly; Drakon moves closer to the storm trooper and whispers, only loud enough for the troop to hear.
"P.S I thank you for loving my art, but shhh the other guy doesn't know that. So don't say anything."-Drakon tells the trooper just shacks his head and Chuckles a bit. Drakon picks up his food and goes to his room, to eat and rest
Chapter #1 end
(So what do you think?)
