YAY! Here we are kiddies. Did ya miss me? No? Okay.
The thought about rewritting this actually came to me AFTER I said I was gonna continue this story. I honestly wasn't satisfied with some things in JOOOLIA... Okay, not using that acronym again. Most of the things will be the same. But some things will be different this time. You will notice a little bit of my writing style changed in fact. Some key points will also change along with it. Now I have a somewhat better idea for how I want this to end. And if you're lucky then I'd be able to update at least once every two weeks.
Disclaimer: I DO NOT own Adventure Time. This is the first and last time I will say this throughout the entire fanfic. Cause honestly this is a waste of time. If I did own it then Finn would have lost his mind, Jake would have learned to take life more seriously and Bubblegum would have been hanged..
-Chapter Start-
"Rawwww!" A massive Troll roared as it swung its club at the little girl that stole it's shiny things. The little girl jumped away from the troll's weapon and jumped on it's arm. She took out a pink sword from her backpack on her back and stabbed the troll's arm. The Troll yelled out in pain then glared at the human girl that hurt him.
"Now, Cake!" The girl shouted and a Small orange and white cat came out of the woods, thrusting it's arms at the Troll her arms stretched long and tripped the Troll. the creature fell on it's back, arm still bleeding and the girl on his arm till he landed.
"Yeah Baby!" Cake calls out. "That troll is gonna call for its Mama after we'e done with it!"
The Troll stood up, glaring at the two smaller creatures with hate it's eyes started to water and it whimpered out. "You Mean!"
With that it ran away crying and calling it's mother.
"Well." the cat said, turning back into a normal size and more relaxed position as she spoke to her human partner. "You know I didn't think that would happen literally."
"I sorta feel bad now. I mean, how many people made a Troll cry like that?" The girl frowned as she looked her sister for advice.
"Oh don' worry honey. that Troll was probably a wuss anyway." Cake calms her down.
"Oh Well, Let's just go and take this loot back to the tree house. I'm beat, after going through those two dungeons and now a Troll." The girl said, pointing at the large bag filled with gold and stuff.
"Me too Fionna. Me too." Cake said as she began larger and picked up the bag and put it on her shoulder.
"What time is it?!"
"RELAXATION TIME!"
After 20 minutes of walking from their part. Cake offered Fiona a ride but the human declined. The door to their treasure room opened by Fiona's hand as she and Cake entered the tree house that they have been residing in for the past half a decade.
"Fiona! Cake.!" a childish voice squeaked out.
"What up BMO?" the human girl asked. She picked up a small square robot with green arms and legs imitated by it's color scheme.
"Upstairs! There is someone upstairs!" The robot whisper yelled.
Alarmed, the two heroins gave each other a glace before they grabbed their weapons. Well, made weapon in Cake's case. And slowly made their way upstairs.
"Cake!" Fiona whispered at her sister. "See who's up their!"
"I got it!" Cake said, stretching her head while making sure to stick with the walls she looked around into their Kitchen. "I see him!"
"Keep it quiet!" Fionna whispered.
"Don't worry Fiona He's unconscious!" Cake grabbed Fionna with her arms which were still on the lower floor under her head...[When I said changed writing style. I meant this]
"Upsy daisy." the Cat said as she pulled the human up.
Fionna made a face but made no complaints. She looked around for the intruder and it didn't take long fro her to locate the intruder. Slowly making her way to the intruder she kept her weapon ready in case it was a face eating monster. She poked the creature a couple of times and it din't move.
"Hey! Are you alive?!" Cake, walking up to Fiona and practically shouting near her ear.
"Gah!" Fiona nearly shouted as well. "Cake?! Why did you do that?!" the cat shrugs.
"Flip him over, if he's dead then we need to get rid of him before he's stench stinks up the place." Cake said, pinching her nose as she pointed at the weird puke like substance near the intruder's face.
"True." Fionna said, flipping over the body of the intruder she finally got a better look at him. He wore a baggy blue pants with a normal long sleeved black T-shirt with a white hood. Golden Yellow hair on his head and a stressed expression on his face. She could barely see something thin and silver in color around his neck. A necklace maybe.
That was when she got to his face. She beat down the urge to blush when she looked at his beautiful face that was covered slightly due to his blond hair.
"woohoo! He's a hunk!
Fionna gave her sister a shocked looked. "Cake! You're married!"
"So? It's not like I'm kissing him or anything. It's all cool." Cake defended. "Soo. Do we throw him out?" Cake asked as she used her powers to lift up the man and tie him up in case he would try to harm them when he wakes up. But in doing so the hoodie that was hiding his head fell and his long hair was shown hanging behind him, disappearing into his cloths. His head his side.
Fionna's jaws open in shock.
-Line Break-
"Ughhhh."
His head hurt like hell. He was really beginning to hate teleportation right now. "Ohhhh my baby-man head. I hate teleportation."
His eyes gave him the knowledge that he was in some sort of room(Duh) and other than the lamp beside the bed he was occupying, the entire room was dark. And while his eyes failed to give him anything more, his nose told him that he was in the Candy Kingdom. And he was in no mood to deal with Bonnie Bubblegum.
Finally noticing that he was tied on the bed he was in, he started to struggle. Images of being experimented on by Bubblegum made their way into his mind. He did not know where they originated from but at this moment he didn't care. He just wanted to get away from here.
The lights in the room came alive and he was forced to stop his struggling and clench his eyes shut to lessen down the stinging sensation in his eyes.
"Oh my! I'm sorry, are you alright?" He heard a male voice. He opened his eyes when the light hurt less and gave the man who spoke. He had greenish skin and wore glasses, a few freckles were also on his face but even Finn had to admit that he was very handsome. "Are you alright?"
"Uh. Yeah. Sort of. My head hurts a bit." Finn replied.
"Ah. No physical pain other than that?" the doctor asked and Finn shook his head. "That's Good." He wrote on down on a clipboard.
"Name?"
"Huh?"
"I need your name otherwise I can't discharge you."
"Oh. My name is..." Finn thought to himself. Whoever this guy was didn't know who Finn was. Maybe he could use this to his advantage."..Pen. My name is Pen. Your turn."
The doctor didn't expect that as he was momentarily caught off guard. "Doctor Prince. Nice to Meet your acquaintance. "With that he left. the tension and awkwardness in the air was too much for him.
Finn remembered that he was still stuck on the bed. The bindings still as tight as ever. "Hey! Hey! Hey! Hey! I'm still tied up here. Why am I tied up!?"
No one answered his question and the next few minutes were spent in a silence. Till...
The door that Doctor Prince went out through burst open and a girl came in though it. She stomped in and grabbed Finn by his shirt." Okay bub. Who are you? What are you?"
Finn took a moment to marvel at the beauty at the girl threatening him. and honestly he wasn't threatened. but wait, why did she look so familiar? "The name's Pen. And as to what I am...What's it to you?"
The girl narrowed her eyes and let go of Finn then grabbed the edge of the bunny ear of her hat. And pulled it off. Her blond hair fell and her head was fully visible to Finn.
Finn was caught off guard by the sudden action and noticed what she was obviously trying to show him. "You-You're a-"
"Human." Fionna finished his sentence. The two stared each other down. Well, Fionna stared Finn/Pen down since he was still tied to the bed.
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"Seriously. Please untie me, my butt is itching."
-Chapter End-
Okay. I imagined that ending slightly different. Honestly I wanted to make this chapter a bit longer. At last 2000 words. But this will have to do. Please review and tell me if this is an improvement compared to my old style of writing.
A.N: I'll be replacing the previous chapters with the new versions. I'll also be changing the summery.
