This is my first attempt at a Supernatural fanfic

This is my first attempt at a Supernatural fanfic. Based on my favorite character, Ruby. I don't mean to anger and/or offend anyone with this, it's the way I see this playing out. I don't own Supernatural, by the way!

She was born in England, 1793. Her parents were Catholics by the names of Henry and Elizabeth Timmon. She was born into her family the first, followed by Crystal and Jenny. Ruby was the rebel, the one that didn't want to follow her parent's religious ways.

At fifteen, she attended a ball that would boost her parent's social status. Her parents were arranging for her to be escorted by William Marshire, a short and skinny boy with skin problems. How did she react to this? She raised the hem of her skirt to barely cover her knees, just for the scandal of it.

At twenty she found the greatest way of all to rebel. She ran off and joined a tribe of witches outside of London. Praying to their god, Lucifer, she felt mighty. Mightier than she ever did attending church services back with her family. The tribe preformed rituals every night, bonding them with blood, giving sacrifices to Lucifer. She'd taken to the name of Ruby for rubies were red as the blood that bonded her to her sisters.

She spent time with her sisters for two years, practicing their rituals that granted luck on the fortunate and inflicted pain on the unfortunate. A demon known only as Yellow-Eyes came to their small tribal grounds one night during a ceremony.

"Which one of you lucky witches is coming with me, back down to hell? To see your savior? To see Lucifer," he questioned, chuckling. He examined each young witch, each of them trembling with fear. Finally he turned to her, to Ruby, and bent down to her level. He grabbed her jaw, and forced her to look at him. "Ah, you look just about right. Young, pretty, scared, and in need of guidance. How would you like to go to hell with me? To hear the screams of all the tortured souls and not be able to do a thing to help, because Lucifer himself is constantly with you, staring at you with unseeing and unblinking eyes, not letting you move an inch as he burns you? Lucifer is one crazy son of a bitch."

Her eyes glistened like glass, tears escaping. "Please.. please let me go." She cried, closing her eyes and trying to regain composure.

"No, I don't think I can do that. You're coming with me." he said, smirking. He jerked her to feet as she cried out in fear. The others looked on in horror.

"Help me! Please! Let me go!" she screamed, thrashing violently. As she tried to get away, Yellow – Eyes grew angry. He put a hand to her forehead and she lay limp in his arms. "How do you like your Lucifer now?" Yellow – Eyes asked, smirking. He snapped his fingers and he disappeared with Ruby.