I do not own the rights to the Haruhi series or its character's. I do however own my OC's. This is my first fanfic so criticism is welcome.
"talking"
POV character thoughts
'non-POV character thoughts'
(Non voice communication)
I ~~~~~~ I
He was hoping along the rooftops looking for anything out of place around his hometown.
He was a paranormal investigator working with his younger sister. His father trained them both in self defense and in gun usage. Combined with other tutors that he learned with he and his sister were basically ninja's. All that was missing was the outfit.
Usually he didn't find anything but today was different.
One of the alleyways he had just passed started to glow. When he looked there were 3 adults there weren't there before.
What the hell?
There were 2 males in suits with sunglasses. The 3rd was a women with long orange hair.
He pulled out his phone to text his sister. (I saw something strange. Come over here ASAP and tell me what's going on.)
He jumped down and landed on the orange haired girl before grabbing her and putting a gun to her head. "Now just who might you be?"
I ~~~~~~ I
(I saw something strange. Come over here ASAP and tell me what's going on.) She sighed and put away her phone.
She grabbed her gun and as all badasses need one a cloak and got on her motorcycle.
'Who the hell rides a modercycle without a helmet?'
'Shouldn't that cloak make it hard to see?'
'How old even is she!?'
Why does everyone have to be so judgemental?
It took her awhile in life before the voice's stopped bothering her and started becoming an asset. She always felt comfortable around her brother. She didn't hear his inner voice.
It didn't take long before she got the the alleyway and she quickly hoped off.
'who does this guy think he is? I would retern to the original timeplane if this guy didn't seem like the kind to talk'
Original timeplane? I can see why he would need me to figure this out
She pulled out her gun "Who are you!? What are your names?" They were unlikely to say but that wasn't the point.
'Okano Yushiro'
'Kimura Hikaru'
'Mikuru Asahina'
They can't help but think it ;)
'How has reinforcements not came yet? I would totally tell them to send more agents to the past once I got back!'
Crap they're time travelers!
BANG*
BANG*
BANG*
Smoke came out of her gun while 3 body's fell to the ground. She turned to her brother. "They are time travelers. If we let them live they would have told their faction about us. It would be a battle we would't win." She threw him. The motorcycle keys. "Get the car from home. I want to examine the body's for implants and such. We need to know what we are dealing with and implants could help if we figure out how they work."
He smirked "On it! I'll be right back with the car." He got on the motorcycle and took off.
Time travelers ay? Welp, we definitely found something paranormal to investigate outside of ourselves.
I ~~~~~~ I
That was the first chapter. I hope you liked it! Let me know what you think.
If it wasn't clear the sister can read minds and the brother is immune to it.
