I found that my story was messed up so I'm back through and I'm going to fix it up some. I think I know what to do now so please bear with me.
Chapter 1
In my life I have been many things. Depending on the people around me, they could tell you that I'm a sweet girl and that I never cause trouble.
"Big sis, come play with us." Two boys sing in their silly voices.
I smile and get up from my little chair.
"What will we play today?"
"I want to play chess." Danny sings.
"No let's play tag."
"Chess." Danny argues.
" ." Donny argues back.
I laugh at their childishness.
"I have a better solution. Why don't we play a game of cards? I would like to see if you've actually been practicing."
"That's a good idea big sis. We should play cards. Let's go get them brother."
"We'll be right back."
They run off.
It's hard to believe that only a year ago they didn't know what kindness was. I go back to my seat. Well they'll be gone for a while. They will want to fight over who gets to carry the cards.
I close my eyes for a moment, letting the sun soak into my skin.
"Hey, did you know? That every game has its own set of rules?
Those rules can either be broken or held. But you knew that, right? That every game has its own rules."
My eyes burst open and I look around. As I come back to right in front of me I see a small rabbit in a waist coat.
"That can't be real." I mutter.
Maybe I'm still dreaming.
Suddenly he's a real person. He looks like a normal person with the exception of the blood red eyes and his rabbit ears.
"This is where you start to follow me." He says.
I'm definitely still dreaming, this kind of stuff just isn't possible.
"Fine have it your way then." He says with a sigh.
He pulls me up before I could say anything. I try to squirm out of his grasp.
"LET ME GO!" I shout.
"Please don't shout in my ear." He says while running.
He only runs for a short amount of time.
"Where there is a giant hole you must jump down it, those are the rules."
There is no way there could be a giant hole in my garden. What's happening?
"NO!" I shout as he jumps down the hole.
"I love falling don't you?" He asks.
"NO, I DON'T!" I scream as we fall.
I am deathly afraid of heights.
"Awe, please don't scream my love. It's only for a short while then we'll be in our true destination."
This guy is freaking crazy.
"You're going to get us killed!"
"Nonsense, I would never do that to you. After all I love you."
This guy is definitely crazy. I don't even know him. With my heart racing and everything becoming blurry I fade into the safety of blacknessā¦
*TIME SKIP*
I open my eyes to a somewhat dark place.
"Oh, good you're awake."
My head shoots up and I quickly back away from him.
"STAY AWAY FROM ME!" I shout.
"AW, please don't be afraid my love. I wouldn't dare harm you.
After all you're my sweet Bo."
Note to self, this guy has serious problems and is now rhyming.
"Now please my sweet, I have a treat. Please drink this." He says holding out a small vial.
"No way! I have no clue what that stuff is and even if I did I still wouldn't drink it." I say my judgment firm and unmoving.
"Oh well, I had hoped you would drink it yourself but I suppose this will have to do."
He suddenly downs the liquid in the vial.
Before I could say anything or even get away he forces our lips together. I do my best to keep from drinking whatever it is. He presses a spot on my neck and I have no choice but to drink it.
He pulls away from me when he's certain the liquid is gone.
"Now you have to play the game. I'll leave you now my sweet. Please come visit me sometime though. I would love to see you."
He walks off.
OH. MY. GOODNESS.
What the **** did he just make me drink?
Author's note: So I finished the first chapter so you guys can reread it and tell me if it's better. Thank you.
