It's Dark At Night
Title: It's Dark At Night
Rating: T+
Genre: romance, fantasy, historical-fiction
Summary: Duke Zuko was very much pleased with his lifestyle. Riches, status, and women. Until he meets one of his hired, yet poorly paid, servants. Can she teach him humility before he becomes too cocky? And can he tell her his secret? In the middle of a war anything is possible.
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He held great importance yes… but feelings no. His love for wealth and status made him who he was. This lowly life had bothered him like the birds in the morning when singing and waking him up. He wasn't suppose to be here at all. He wasn't suppose to try and reach out to her. He wasn't suppose to invite her to the ball with him. However, why was he here…. Why was he going to ask a servant to dance with him like the music that flows through your soul. Yes he loved the woman. He admitted it…. He loved her. Why am I doing this, he thought. He pushed the doors open and walked in. Zuko could sense the cooks and maids staring at him with amazement. They never saw him enter this room let alone pass by this room. Zuko walked towards a small petite figure. She had her hair up today. In a messy bun that seemed like she didn't even bother to fix. Her clothes that contained of a brown dirty shirt with a knee length 3rd class skirt was under an apron smeared with pasta on it. She was humming the summer song that the Maestro Altenburg the most famous maestro of their time had conducted. Her simple attire was gorgeous even though she had dirt and nothing else. He gently tapped her shoulder and turned her around. He could see the expression of surprise on her face but soon faded away into the darkness. He gave her the single white rose and gently but with pressure, pricked her finger on the prickle of the rose. The young woman gasped and grunted it pain. Her cocoa colored finger was soon lifted to his lips. Her blue eyes stared in wonder, at what the Duke of Altenburg was doing. He gently opened his lips and sucked the blood off of her finger.
