Naruto: Eyes of Elements
Chapter 1
One night Kohona, hidden village of leaves would never forget was the Kyuubi Attack. The monsterous demon came out of nowhere and destroyed everything in it's wake. Kohona lost thousands of shinobi to the mighty demon as they were stomped, eaten. and vaporized by the sinister creature. Just as they all lost hope the village to it's knee's begging for mercy the newly elected yondaime hokage, namikaze minato appeaered atop gamabunta the toad boss summon. The surviving shinobi cheered with hope as the hokage preformed a quick sersis of hand seals. Then in a flash of light the demon disappered and the hokage lyied dead on the toads head carrying a bundle in his arms. Naruto was the bunles name Uzumaki Naruto, son of Uzumaki Kushina and Minato. So after the reelected sandaime gathered the village for a meeting after the battle to dicuss something important.
Hiruzen stood atop the wooden bedistal holding a sleeping naruto in his arms. He cleared his throat and spoke " citzen of kohona today we have faced a major loss to the demon but our hokage defeated the demon." Hearing this they cheered at there vitory over the mighty kyuubi. " But at great cost minato sacrificed his life to seal the demon into this boy Uzumaki Naruto " said Hiruzen. After hearing this the villagers charged the stand shouting " KILL THE DEMON!!! ". Hiruzen summoned the ANBu and ordered them to take the villagers home and issused the secert of naruto to not be spoken to the younger generation or death.
So naruto grow up with no parents to his name and constant beatings by shinobi and villagers alike. They always came to kill him but only left him alive for more later. Naruto was walking home ignoring the gales and insults threw his way. He put on a smiling face in the streets acting aloof and stupid. Then he enetered his apartment he droped the mask and a look of evil appeared on his face. One of manical rage and hate for kohona and the idiot villager that had wrong him so much over the years. He learned years ago about kyuubi or kira as she called herself. Yes it was quite a shock to find out the demon was in fact a women.
She stood 5'8 feet tall and had a slender body. She had long crimson hair with black streaks in her hair down to her mid back. She had had clawed hands and sharp canines feral like with nine tails behind her. She wore a black kimono with red flames all over the fit her tan skin perfectly making look like a goddess. They made a deal of training for the destruction of kohona and Uchiha Madara. They both hated the arrogant clan and that man made her try to destory kohona. So naruto sat down on his bed crossed legged and began to meditate
He awoke in a yellow sewer filled with red and blue pipes alover the place. Naruto walked around the corner towads a bright light and entered. His eyes ajosted to the light to show a massive cage with a piece of paper with the kanji for 'seal' on it. " My my kit so early eager todays training hmm?" said kira. Naruto rolled his eyes in annoyance and enetered the cage and tap her head. They awoke a huge clearing alover were dead bodies filled with holes and stab wounds. Naruto stood up and yawned looking rather bored at the moment. Kira entered her battle stance as did naruto they stared at eachother then vanished in a blur. Naruto aimed a punch at her gut but kira blocked his blow and kicked him in the shin and punched his face. He doubled over and gained his balance and preformed a hand seal and pointed at her " Raiton: Lightning shot no justu " he annouced. Then a bolt of lightning shot out of his finger in a steady stream aim for her head. She dodged and charged holdind a senbon a tried to stab him in the neck to parylaze him.
He saw this and jumped back and threw some kunai at her nailing her in the thigh. She grunted and glared at him then looked shocked. " Those eyes it can't be " said kira. Naruto rised an eyebrow at that and looked in a near by puddle. his eyes were silver with four tome in the each a different color. One red,blue,yellow, and green and the pupil looked a little darker than before. He looked at her with wide eye as did she both filled with shock. " your kekki gneki the element eye(1) " said kira filled with shock. Naruto eyes filled wiyh a look of amusement at that comment. These eyes were a ancient thing said to have made the elements themselves at the dawn of creation. They gave the user all element affinaty and they learned elemental justu faster. Also they could control nature and the weather at will comined with predicting movement of your oppentent and a abilt of the rinnegan the six paths. Well this gave you four each with a certain element(2). " great now i have an adavantage over all these fools " naruto thought evilly. He let out a evil laugh that would make orochimaru shiver with fear.
He then decided to increase his training ten fold and learn every possiable justu. He decided to make a army of follower to help him destroy kohona and conquer kohona(3). So naruto learned over the course of six months all Katon justu, suiton,fuuton, and raiton he could find or steal from a justu libary in town. He was noe eight years old and was snrolled in to the adamey this year to. He stood 5'3 and wore a long leeved dark blue cloak with a high collar he also wore a straw hat with bell on the front. It had longer sleeve with black flave on the edges with red tint to it. He wore black ANBU pants and and a long sleeve fishnet shirt underneath also blood red nail polish on his finger and toes. On his back was a large battle fan with the kanji for 'Death God' on the center.
He sighed a little drinking his tea." Man this adamey is stupid theach us nothing but simple justu and old history " said to the sleep nara next to him. Chouji nodded at him munching on some chips and mouth to full to bell rang and naruto ran out ran to the training flied today he was to fight sasuke, the 'last' uchiha. he stood there patiently as the arrogant avenger walked into the ringed and looked ever so arrogant at the grinning naruto. " Last chance dope give up " said sasuke. Naruto shook his head in a no fashion and sasuke took up a basic uchiha fighting stance. He charged at amazing speed for a genin and aimed a kick at naruto head. Naruto just stood there and dodged as sasuke flew past him and hit the wall. Sasuke got up and charged again and sent out a sersis of unches and kicks.
Naruto just stood there and dodged them all looking bored to death at his weak skill." come uchiha your boring me no skill itachi was right you are foolish and weak " taunted naruto. Sasuke grintted his teeth in anger at panted and looked at naruto amazed. He looked pefectly fine like the battle just started and bored and annoyed. He preformed hand seals and shouted out his justu " Katon:Grand fireball no justu " as he said the justu a large fire ball erupted from his mouth and engulfed naruto. He smiled arrgantly as his fan club cheered his name " SASUKE-KUN YOUR AWSOME!! " shouted his number one fan Haruno Sakura. Then they heard appluse and looked to see naruto standing there unscratched, unburned perfectly fine.
" weak uchiha a low C-class katon justu weak itachi will kill you your next meeting " said naruto smiling. He preformed two and seals and threw some senbon yellig out " Katon: Senbon of hells fury " the senbon erupted in to falmes and nailed sasuke in the shoulder sending a wave of pain through his body. Naruto shushined off in a cracle of lighting leaving sasuke to wollo in pain and self-pity. He appaered in a dark room light with blue torches standing on large stone pillars. In the center was a table with restraits and chains holding down a bloody man covered in burn marks and cut scars. " Now where where we? " asked naruto evilly. All that could be heard was scrams of terror and agony but none could be heard because of the walls.
Naruto grinned at his work he had found out the loctain of his target. He shushined off to kumogarke he'ed find his target and recruit them for 'peace' with the world. That what he trult dreamed of peace but only cleansing the world could do that. So a war was to start and he'd be the leader of the army to the path to salvation and justice - The Shadow Allanance would rise again slowly but surely they would return tp this piteful world.
So thats the end of chapter 1 reveiw give me ideas thank you!!
(1) - can you give me suggestins for names for it?
(2) - What body there was held the element of the tomoe and control over that element
(3) - well heres the first hint to his plans, Who should join him Pein?Konan? give me your sugestions
Well until my next update my readers!!
Ja Ne,
Pein of Death
