Just a short test to see how you guys might react. It came to me a year ago and I've finally started to pick it back up now that I'm going back through all my files. (Need to get them transferred, truthfully) Well, just write me a review and tell me what ya think. I would really love some opinions.
Do I need to add more?
More detail?
Is there something you feel is missing? Tell me!
Well, later! Gotta go start writing more!
"Get rid of it now honey. There is no need to have a bastard's child when you already have three pure kids and a husband. Don't let that thing destroy your life." The grandmother ordered as she watched her daughter hold the half hour old baby girl.
The woman thought for a few minutes before nodding and handing the baby to the nurse. The nurse held the baby with care as she walked out of the room. The child was then sent to the Shinra Orphaning.
Reeve smiled as he held the crying baby in his hands. He had just received the baby girl from the hospital a week ago under orders from the mother that she was to become what they wanted her to be as long as she didn't know who her parents were. Of course her father was unknown while the mother was kept secret. The infant quieted down as Reeve made his way from the foyer to the kitchen. Her eyes wondered around the room before landing on the bottle he held in hand and she squealed in delight. Reeve laugh as he held the warm bottle of milk to her lips. The other orphans were currently taking their naps when the little girl had woken from her nap and he was alone for the next few hours to contemplate over what to name the little baby that was feeding on the milk.
Sorry if its short, but I got the second part for ya too!
