HI! this is my first story so forgive me if there are mistakes,similarities or anything like that. Its completely accidental.
She watched him. She always did. She watched when, as a child, he was bullied -wanted desperately to help,but was shy,always too shy- and was kicked to the ground in disdain and hate. She watched in awe as he always got up and went back for more. He would smile that beautiful smile that brightened her day whenever she saw it, the smile she insisted saved her, gave her courage.
She felt for him. A feeling of admiration at his spirit, which slowly became so much more. She was overjoyed when he passed the Genin tests, hoping that he was in the same team as her, sad when she wasn't. She felt pride for him when he beat her team-mate, guilty pride. She adopted his nindo as her own, and lived up to it to the best of her abilities. she felt his pain when he lost his best friend to a fate worse than death, and prayed daily that she had the courage to comfort him.
She was pleasantly surprised when she saw him after three years. He had grown into a handsome man, a proficient ninja, while still retaining his childlike exuberance which drew her to him. She watched as he grew stronger and stronger, improving himself to catch up to the traitor he still called a friend. She felt a feeling that grew as he did, a flame that caused her face to burn when he spoke her. She was still soft-spoken, but she got out of her habitual shyness- until he came near her.
She felt fear for his life when she watched him face an opponent far, far stronger than him; a fear which moved her body in front of his, a fear which gave her courage to confess that she loved him. that was the feeling-love.She would learn later that her 'death' cased him to lose control, helping him defeat his enemy. She felt a sense of accomplishment at causing such a strong reaction from him.
She felt despair when he didn't acknowledge her confession, followed by relief. She watched as he finally gained the acknowledgement that he had always received acknowledgement too, from her family, just like she always wanted.
She felt a burning, exhilarating joy when he publicly announced that she was the only girl he could love. The feeling increased when he took her on their first date. And their second. And their third. None of which had even a hint of ramen. She thought she couldn't be happier. But he proved her wrong the day she saw him at the gates of her house, overheard him ask her father for her hand in marriage. The happiness increased when he finally proposed under the light of the moon.
Now, she watches him, her light, her personal sun, her husband, play with a small girl who looks like a miniature of him. His blonde hair sticks out in all directions, and his sapphire eyes shine like the ocean in the sun. She watches as he looks around, sensing her gaze. He smiles that smile which brightens the room and her life...
" Come on Hina-chan! Play for a while!"
She smiles at him and walks up to him. "What is it Naruto-kun? "
He grins and holds his hand to her. "well, just thought I'd spend some time with my beautiful wife and child, before I have to get back to Hokage business."
She smiles, blushing and joins them her family,not letting her bulging abdomen deter her from their game.
So, what do ya'll think ? review and tell me! Criticisms are accepted but only if they make sense (eg. you suck is not sensible. Tell me why it sucks.
