Here is chapter one of my story, Please Enjoy, and I promise it gets much better in the later chapters. Please review, because it helps me become a better writer! Thanks for reading, and enjoy.
Oh, and by the way, remember that Nessie is now done ageing and she is always going to be eighteen-ish. (Jacob isn't ageing either.)
Disclaimer: I don't own twilight or any of the characters…unfortunately
Bella's Point of View
It had been just about six years since I had become a vampire. This life was different, but not bad. The thirst was painful at times, but to be honest, I expected much worse. I never knew I would really at least a skip the newborn stage. I was quite happy that I could continue on loving Edward without having to live through year of extreme thirst. Now I can love him more than I ever have without ever worrying about aging. I loved almost everything about this life, except that Renesmee couldn't see Charlie, because she aged so quickly. She appeared, and pretty much was an eighteen year old, and this is how old she will get. Maybe she can see him in ten years since she has stopped aging. Then it would be normal for her to be the size and intelligence that she is.
Nothing really had changed around here, except Renesmee of course.
I could tell that Edward wasn't acting himself, so I decided to try to talk to him. I let down my shield so he could read my mind.
"Bella, I have some bad news to break to you." He told me with sadness in is beautiful face.
"I could tell something was bothering you, is everything okay, Edward." I asked sounding very concerned.
"It's okay, but we have to move, Bella." He said."I'm sorry; I know this will be the hardest on you, because you are new to this life. I promise you will get used to moving. Please don't be too upset. We can visit Charlie on weekends."
I loved it here in Forks; this is where almost everyone I loved lived. But, I knew this was coming soon. Carlisle was now pretending to be thirty eight and he was barley passing as thirty. We had to stay inside most of the day, because most people thought we were at college.
"Where are we going to go, Edward?" I asked, hoping that we wouldn't be moving far.
"Honey, we have found a very overcast city in Canada, it isn't too far." He said.
This wasn't going to be too bad after all. Canada was close enough.
"When will we leave?"
"Tomorrow, Honey, I'm so sorry I didn't tell you sooner." Edward said. "But we won't be starting school until the end of the summer."
"Edward, I'm scared." I said sounding week.
"I can assure you there is nothing to be scared of, darling."
"But what if I slip up at school."He knew what I meant. "Or if I am too obvious and some one finds out about what we are."
"Honey, you and I are in all of the same classes, and I will not leave your side, I promise." Edward said. "Plus, your self control is just amazing. You're amazing honey."
"Thank you Edward, you always know the right thing to say." I told him.
"Let's go to the cottage and pack up our things." He told me, as he kissed my forehead, and then slowly worked his way down to my mouth. My arms tightened in his hair, but then we heard Renesmee.
He promised me that we would come back to our beautiful home in Forks in due time. Once, everyone we know had passed away.
I decided to go visit Charlie for one last time.
"Edward, I'm going to go visit Charlie for one last time." I told him.
I arrived at Charlie's house, and he was very glad to see me. He gave me a going away present, and a present for Renesmee, Edward, Alice, and even Carlisle and Esme. It was sad to leave, but I handed him a letter from Renesmee, Hugged him, said goodbye, and even promised to visit soon.
We all had to take separate cars to be able to take all of our stuff, and all of our cars. We arrived outside the beautiful home in less than an hour, considering it was midnight and nobody was on the road. This meant we could drive Cullen speed.
Alice's Point of View
The house was perfect! Esme had done such a beautiful job designing this one. It was very large, and was painted a shade that was a combination of blue, green, and grey. I couldn't wait to organize my room.
"Esme, can you show us to our rooms." I asked trying not to sound impatient.
"Of course, Alice, you and Jasper are on the third floor, first door to the right. Rosalie, you and Emmett are on the same floor, and the third door to the right. Edward and Bella, you are on the same floor, but the second door to the right. Nessie, you are the room right across from Edward and Bella." Esme said. "Carlisle and I are on the second floor, if you need us. The study room is on the second floor. There is a living room, dining room and kitchen on the first floor. Each of your bedrooms has a built in bathroom and closet that I'm sure Alice will fully stock for you."
"Thank you for this beautiful house Esme." Bella said.
"Oh, and I almost forgot, I haven't had time to design your room, but we will be shopping tonight for them. I already bought each of you a new laptop to email everyone in Forks with." Esme added.
"Thank you!" I almost screamed.
I couldn't wait for shopping tonight; it was going to be great. I had to go see my room. I tried to get Bella excited, but man she hated spending money. When I reached my room the first thing I looked at was the size of my closet. It was huge! My room was perfect for me. It was very large, had a enormous closet, and a very large bathroom that resembled a salon. My laptop was beautiful as well, it was hot pink. I only had to beg Jazz for about a minute to paint our room hot pink. I told that if he didn't agree he would have to go shopping with me for back to school clothes. Nobody hated shopping more than Jasper.
It was finally time to go shopping. I was so excited. We were going to have to take two cars to get there, because since we were buying things for our rooms, everyone had to come. When I walked downstairs everyone was arguing about who would be stuck in the car with me.
"Oh come on guys, I know I get over excited, but I'm not that bad." I told them.
"Um, Alice, I hate to break it to you, but you are very annoying before we go shopping." Emmett said trying to sound sincere, but I knew he was just being sarcastic.
I ended up with Bella, Edward, and Nessie. Of course Jasper too, he was the only one who could really tolerate me.
When we arrived I headed straight to the paint. I was originally going to pick out pink, but I decided that I was going to choose a color that Jasper would like too. Partially because I wanted to be nice and mostly because I really wanted to go shopping with him, and I probably wasn't going to be able to keep my promise.
I ended up with a nice deep purple-ish, blue-ish color, which was very fashion forward. I then picked out all of my furniture, and found a beautiful black and white photo of the Eiffel tower. Next, my mission was to help Edward and Bella who seemed to be struggling.
"Hey Bella, Edward, I decided to be the kind sister that I am and personally design your room." I said to them.
"No!' They both said in unison.
I guess I wouldn't bother with them; instead I went to help Nessie.
Her room was going to be bright pink, and themed on her love of fashion. (Which she got from me.)
Once everyone was done, we headed back to our beautiful home.
Bella's point of view
Edward and I decided to theme our room on music and to be even more specific, the piano. We had a grand piano in our room, and our walls were chocolate brown. There were many pictures in black and white on our walls. There were pictures of me and Charlie on my birthday (although that brought back some sad memories.)Pictures of me and Edward at prom when I was human, and picture's of Edward, Nessie (yes, I finally agreed to the nickname.), and Jacob. But, my favorite picture of all was one of Jacob, Seth, Leah, Charlie, Sue, Esme, Carlisle, Billy, Esme, Emmett, Rosalie , Alice, Jasper, Renesmee, and me, this was almost my entire family, and it was a nice picture. I really did enjoy our room; it had a warm feeling to it. I have to say, it was sort of fun designing it although I wouldn't dare tell Alice. She would get very over excited that I was almost enjoying shopping.
Emmett, Rose, Jazz, Alice, and Carlisle had gone out hunting, Esme was putting finishing touches on our house, Nessie was emailing Charlie, and Edward was playing the piano. I left all of my books at our Forks home so I really had nothing to do. I offered help to Esme, but she was almost finished. I logged on to my new laptop, a very generous gift from Esme and Carlisle. I had a new email, which was unusual, because I really never got emails. The email was from Angela, my old friend from Forks High School.
Bella,
I have really missed you. We haven't talked in about six years. How are you and Edward? I have graduated college and am now working as a teacher. What are you up to these days? If possible we should try to get together sometime. The reason I have emailed you is to ask your current address, because I would like to invite you to my wedding to Ben. Please email me back soon. I've really missed you!
Love, Angela
Wow, this was much unexpected. I needed to talk to Edward about this. I really did want to go, but would I be able to.
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