A Torn Petal

Nikkita here :) This is my new story i hope you all love it :) i don't know who the man will be or if there will even be a man for her or if she just dies or something but reviews never fail for suggestions. :) I don't own Naruto or its characters. So please enjoy.


Like the soft velvet of a rose petal, she drifted through with the wind of the unknown lands. Her mind was blank. The lands foreign and unforgiving to trespassers. The winds disheveled her pink tresses as it bit at her pale skin. Her pools of emerald shot side to side never once meeting another pair.

Nothingness filled her senses, it surrounded her in empty pools, There was nothing but the air that filled her lungs and stung her dry lips. Orange yellow light danced on the horizon as the luminous fire sphere set beyond it. Where was she? And Who... Her thoughts ceased as a chill ran down her spine.

One sole pale extremity lay just before her trembling body. The palpitations of her heart grew frequent as the space between each lessened. Emerald eyes heavy with the tangle of fear and desperation crept up taking in every detail they could catch.

Blackness. A coat? Clouds...Face...Her breath hitched as she studied the stranger's face. Her eyes met another's in a battle of endless stares as they studied the other.

She watched realization flash behind his eyes as he blinked to end the battle. The throbbing ceased slowing to an almost unhealthy rate. Her dirty hand lay gently in the one outstretched.

Their strong fingers encased her own in a gentle grip. It seemed hours before she was pulled beneath the large trench coat. The two bodies disappeared from sight.


A few days later

Knees dirty, he was still in the mud of the wet ground. He threw the flowers at the lifeless stone hitting the beautiful letters carved into it. His shoulders slumped shaking ever so slightly.

"Why...Why...Where the hell are you?" His shaken voice whispered to the droplets that fell from the sky. His blond hair sagged sadly clinging to his head from the rain, his nails clenched at the ground almost begging it to return what he lost. Tears dribbled off his face landing on the face of a beautiful young woman smiling, frozen with in a small frame. Her green eyes glimmered, filled with life back at his own blurred wet ones.

Why couldn't it be him. Why did they take her? A dirty thumb caressed the photo, salted water and rain waters mixing to wash away the remaining grime. Black eyes watched closely as he shed his tears. He felt the hand on his shoulder, he did not care.

He registered the coos of encouragement and pity, He did not care. She was gone. Forever. Her pearly smile, genuine emeralds that brimmed with emotions, and abnormally brightly colored hair reminding many of the joyous spring. His shaking only intensified with every foolish pity stained whisper that scratched painfully at his ears.

Little mattered with her gone; and he'd never see her again. He shot to a stand, leaving curses trailing behind him in tangled webs. There was no forgiving, there were no orders, no exceptions. She was his friend, his teammate, his love. She wasn't going to die in vain.

The anger rose heating his body under the freezing rain. It bubbled on his skin in physical manifestation, his teeth sharpened extending from his lips barred at the path before him, his eyes narrowed like that of a demon. His nails sharper longer ready to tear at whatever may stand in his way.

He would get revenge or die together with her, where ever she was.

In his departing shadow two pale eyes watched, the tears blurring her vision slightly. Her heart beat erratically confused at the pace to assume. Faster it would beat her mind racing through what she could have...should have done to help the girl. Her blackened jealous heart let her die when she was so close. Slowly painfully it would pound against her feeble body as she pictured the tears that tolled down his beautiful face as he wept for her. Pure confusion wracked her mind fueling each heavy tear that joined the rain in its journey to the ground.

Her feet set in motion quickly behind him. He would not do this alone. She'd have none of it. She followed after the scorched trail the developing beast was creating. The beast was her first priority, he'd do no good for himself or others this way. She had to take him down.

"Seigen no Biju*" She whispered. Chakra shot from her body solid and tangible and wrapped around the beast.

"Shugohakke Rokujûyon Shô!*" She said again and watched as the chakra became sharp and cut through the angry flesh around him. The beast screamed, the force making her wince.

"Juken!*" She shot towards the restrained and crying beast and began her attack. Once by one the multiple chakra tenketsu were closed and the beast began to fall apart. Until he was no more human than she was. She touched the burned flesh softly applying minor healing techniques to his body until she found his blue eyes watching her as she did so.

"N-Naruto!" She stuttered out. His eyes only turned to the sky.

"Hinata." He called to her. She jumped.

"Y-Yes?" She answered hesitantly.

"Go back." He told her. "This is something I will do alone. I don't plan to return with out her." He whispered. Hinata stood frozen.

"W-What..?" She choked out. "Where are you even going Naruto-kun? What will you do when you get there?" She asked him frantically hesitating to heal him any further. He eyes glistened with tears ready to fall.

"I will kill who ever did this. I will get revenge. Then I'll find her, where ever she is. I know she's alive." He responded staring back at the girl.

He felt her cold trembling hand make fierce contact with his cheek and he was suddenly staring at the forest beside him. She had slapped him. He turned to look back at her.

"YOU THINK YOU'RE THE ONLY ONE WHO LOST A LOVED ONE!? SHE HAD A MOTHER! A FATHER! FRIENDS WHO LOVED HER! DON'T BE FOOLISH! YOUR GOING TO TAKE MY LOVED ONE FOR YOUR OWN SELFISH DESIRES?!" She screamed tears dropping on his dirtied orange jumpsuit.

"..." He made no move to respond and she took her kunai from her pouch.

"You will NOT do this alone. Just try and stop me." She said pressing the cold metal to his throat. He smirked darkly.

"Aren't you doing the same? Taking a precious life away from the village by following me? Your father, mother, Neji, Your sister, your team? I have no one left. She was the last one, the last precious person I had. With Sai missing, Sasuke is dead, and now Sakura. There's no one left for me. Follow if you'd like but i hope you leave here with no regrets."

Her pushed her gently from over him and stood. He continued walking forward and she stood wiping her tears away.

"I'm still here..." She whispered into the silence.


Naruto sank to the ground for the night and closed his eyes. Hinata watched him still standing. She took in his battered body and clothing, his unkempt hair, and the pained expression hidden behind an indifferent mask.

She sank to her knees near him. She listened to his even breath and watched as his face relaxed into sleep and his chest rose and fell with every breath. She snuck closer to him to clean the dirt and debris from his skin. She ran her hands through his hair freeing the strands from all that dulled its bright blonde.

She felt her eyes water threatening to leak down her face. How could one man take so much.

She caressed his face once more before falling into a slumber of her own beside him.


So this is my new storyyyy i dont know if the main pair will be naruhina narusaku sakutachi sakugaa so review your favorite? :P

Seigen no Biju - a move i made up to suit the story restriction of the beast

Shugohakke Rokujûyon Shô- that move hinata made up in that one episode where naruto was being a peeing tom XD

Juken- gentle fist