Hello there. I edited it… hopefully it's somewhat better?
Jane's POV
"Live" was all I head through the tiredness, and unforgiving pain that spread through me. I barely opened my eyes to see what was going on. I felt a hand on my head and the comforting warmth it gave.
Gunther's POV
The shady liquid fell in front of my eyes as I began to tremble. I felt my eyes blink several times before I realized what I was doing. I was crying. No, that is not possible. A knight does not cry.
My soul was tortured by the stillness of the body. I should have told her, I should have told her I loved her. "I love you Jane." I knew it was too late, I knew she would not hear me, but hopefully, somehow she would get my message.
