Hello people of fanfic i'm Ninetales29 and new to all this. Just trying to get used to how this web site works. This is my first fanfic story i'm am developing. I hope you give me a chance with me and my writing.
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"Thoughts"
(Pokemon Speech)
Chapter 1: The Flame Enters
One day in the Kalos region is a beautiful site to see. So peaceful, and in the Santalune Forest. Until she arrived, the wanted criminal Hunter J. She landed in the forest looking for pokemon to sell. "Hmmm, he's around here somewhere." She kept searching until she came across tons of pokemon a Diggersby and a Bibaral. They are picking berries for the smaller pokemon. "Targets acquired," she said with a grin, "Salamance flamethrower." Her dragon type fired a giant flame heading toward Diggersby and Bibaral without noticing. They saw is too late and got burned really badly. They got up but the pain was unbearable and fell back down. She aimed her device at them. As it fired a burst of flames came out of nowhere and collided with the beam and the result was a giant smoke cloud. She growled in anger because she knew who it was. Walking out the smoke was a silhouette of a person. Then it walked out reveling to the pokemon hunter. He was 18 wearing a hoodie inside his coat, armor boots, pants, and with a bandana covering his nose to the bottom. Standing beside him was a female fire type Ninetales. "It's you again," hunter j said in a calm voice.
"Leave them alone J," he said with intimidation.
She was still calm, "Like I would listen to you and I'm not alone,"
Soon lots of her goons came out the bushes and surrounding him. Sending out their Golbats. This didn't scare him or his Nintales. He rapidly took out this Bo Staff and started to swing it and hit some of J's men. One of the men charged at him but to only to get hit twice. One in the abdomen and one in the face. Soon he was fighting off about ten maybe eleven of them.
"Golbat, supersonic!"
The bat pokemon obeyed and fired a high pitch wail toward them.
"Ninetales dodge and use psyshock!"
Ninetales looked back and nodded. She swiftly dodges the men as they get hit by their own Golbats. She jumps in the air and her eyes glow with psychic energy. The Golbats didn't feel anything until a blast of energy hit them. They all fell to the ground unconscious while she landed gracefully. The man finished up fighting off J's men. He looked at the field and saw that Hunter J was gone.
"She must have sneaked out," he thought.
He saw the ship in the air and flew off. Then it disappeared. He saw the injured pokemon laying down by a tree. He went over to then but was blocked off by the smaller pokemon. It was hard to tell his face expression hidden in the bandana. He put this Bo Staff away, took off his hood, and pull this bandana down. His face was much more clear. Short black hair, and brown eyes. He kneeled down to the pokemon.
"Please let me help your friends," he started to speak "I promise not to hurt them I only want to help them."
"(Why should we trust you?)" one Bunnelby said with a little threat in his voice.
"The fact that I saved your friend from a pokemon hunter. Oh before any of you freak, yes, out I can understand pokemon."
Many of the wild pokemon had their jaws drop, and some of them moved to let them through. Soon the other moved, and he smiled and approached the injured. He pulled out some potions and gaws wrap and went to work. He started with Diggersby by first spraying the potion on the burned spots on his arm, and ear. Then he wrapped the areas on Diggersby.
"(Thank…you)" the pokemon said.
"No problem," he replied with a smile on this face. "Ninetales. Can you help Bibaral?" he asked. She nodded then tilted her head in confusion.
"Just need to clean up," he pointed at the men on the ground.
While Ninetales cared for Bibaral's wounds he walked over to the men. Got some rope in his coat and tied them up to a tree.
"(Michael, I'm done.)" Ninetales announced.
"Good and now…" he was cut off by the sounds of police sirens. "Nice timing. Ninetales lets go."
They got their stuff but before they left Diggersby thanked them. He nodded and then he and Ninetales left as the police arrived.
"(So now what Michael?)," Ninetales asked.
"We head back to the hideout near Laverre City and rest. Hunter J will strike and I will stop her." He answered
"(It sounds simple but you couldn't get at least this far without Larry and his computer intelligence.)
"I know. I'm happy he is helping me but he is on my shoulder. I'll contact him tomorrow. We can chill out once we get to the hideout."
"(Ok I'm tired and hungry.)"
Michael chuckled as he took out a pokeball and threw it. It opened and the white light reveled Braviary. His one out of three flying types. Braviary screeched in delight. Michael rubbed his head and he liked it.
"Hey Braviary. Let's head back to the hideout it's getting late."
Braviary nodded and lowered himself for Michael and Ninatales to climb on top. Once they were on the flying type took to the skies. Michael looked at the full moon, it was beautiful and the he always loved the full moon.
"Pokemon Hunter J… What am I going to do with you?" Michael thought.
In Hunter J's ship she sat in the captain's seat in the front of the ship. On her monitor a silhouette of a person. One of her clients who wanted the Diggersby and Bibaral.
"You lost the pokemon I assigned you!" the person said.
"He was there before I was." She answered.
"Well I would hang up but I am in a good mood today."
"So we are still in business?"
"Consider this your first and last warning."
Hunter J was silent.
"So what else to you want?" she asked.
"Articuno, Moltres, and Zapdos." He answered. "I have been tracking the legendary bird pokemon for quite some time. When I come close they escape from me."
"And you want me to catch them."
He nodded. "I promise the pay will be much greater than what I originally assigned you. Do you accept?"
"So how do I start?" she said with a grin.
"I have someone who can help you. Step forward please."
The figure was a person with a much bulky body. With gizmos and gadgets around his belt, lots of them.
