Here's the re-uploaded Demon Inside Fic, I'll tell you the whole story

First of all, it wasn't "MY" fault that it got a lemon on the 4th chapter I think, if you remember, I've told you about a partner in the plot? It was him, he posted it without my 'yes' while I was away, and so, that gave me time to rethink what will happen and stuff like that, thanks to the reviewers I've learned something, though I don't think its that great and all but this is my first fic, I've just edited it, re-read it please? And review thank you very much!

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Tomoeda-July 12, 1996-Kinomoto Temple

A boy with messy hair chocolate brown hair and mesmerizing amber eyes is sitting under a cherry blossom tree with a girl with locks of auburn and emerald pools, the boy is wearing a green t-shirt and a baggy black shorts with several pockets on it, while the girl is wearing a baby pink blouse, and a dirty white skirt 2 inches above the knee,

"Hey Sakura" the boy said,

"What is it Syaoran?" Sakura said,

"Lets go into the forest, lets !" Syaoran said with a smile handing his hand towards Sakura, Sakura gladly accepted the hand but when Syaoran was about to pull her but she resisted a little, stopped and said,

"Uncle Keito said that we shouldn't go to the back of the temple, he said that there are demons there!" Sakura said teary eyed,

"Really?" Syaoran asked, his eyes were full of determination and hope, "Please Sakura-chan just this once, tomorrow is my birthday you know …" Syaoran said putting his cute puppy dog eyes,

"Well .. okay but we'll comeback as soon as we sense danger okay?" Sakura said while Syaoran nodded in approval, they went to the forest on the back of the temple and after a long walk they found a small spring which glitters under the sun, Sakura awed at the scene,

"See? I told you nothing bad will happen," Syaoran stated, unknown to them there's someone or something watching them, Sakura sat at the side of the spring as she playfully kicked the water, Syaoran went to the spring and splashed some water onto Sakura and there they played for sometime,

"It's getting late, they might be looking for us by now," Sakura said in a worried tone,

"Okay lets go …" Syaoran said, then a loud growl was heard, they turned around to see something, something they don't know, not an animal and not a human, it's a …

"A DEMON!" Sakura screamed in fright and ran away followed closely by Syaoran,

"RUN SAKURA!" Syaoran yelled as he picked up some stones along their run, he threw it at the demon, it dodge the stones but one stone hit it in its eye, it roared as loud as it could due to the pain, Syaoran threw that stone on the right time, the right force, and the right speed, then they continued running, the demon was far-by angry it roared as electricity came out of its body, it jumped in front of Sakura, raised its hand and launch a punch to Sakura but Syaoran managed to grab her on the right time, they ran again and then a man with a straw hat in a monk's dress appeared,

"Uncle Keito!" Sakura yelled as she ran towards him,

"Find some shelter," he said, unknown to them both went off on separate paths Sakura on the right side on a huge stone and Syaoran on the left tree, Syaoran saw that Sakura's uncle was winning and then he started chanting some spell or a ritual, but what kind of ritual? Syaoran asked to himself, he then remembered one part of the prayer that was being recited and then he looked around to look for Sakura but she was nowhere to be found, he found her coming out in the open on a huge rock, and that was the rock in which Keito was pointing to, it is where the demon will be sealed, Syaoran yelled in his mind, so, Sakura must be in grave danger! Syaoran then took off without notice and ran towards Sakura,

"Youkai …" Syaoran ran as fast as he could to reach Sakura, "Sakura!" Syaoran 's screamed, Keito's eyes are closed that's why he didn't notice that Sakura was on the way,

"Ishi…." Syaoran is near Sakura, he jumped towards Sakura and pushed her aside,

"Missen !" Keito finished, then his eyes flung wide open with shock at what he saw, Syaoran pushed Sakura aside, the demon was sealed inside him, what have he done? how could he commit a mistake, this will forever change Syaoran's life, Syaoran came to Japan because he requested his mother that he wanted to see the temple that was on the news,

Flashback-June 29th-Li residence-Living Room-

Syaoran was scanning the television looking for something to watch when he accidentally placed it on a news, he saw a monk explaining something about a temple, but his eyes were not focused on the man, instead it was focused on the girl on the background, she was playing with her kite, then, Yelan came inside,

"Syaoran what are you watching?" asked his mother,

"Mom, can we go there for my birthday?" Syaoran asked politely,

"Why would you want to go to that temple?" Yelan asked, Syaoran listened again on the television,

"I've heard that you can make wishes here and it'll come true, is that true or just some gossips?" asked the reporter,

"Well, it depends on the person, if he wished and he work hard then it will absolutely come true, but if you did it the other way around, you'll never achieve your wish," the monk finished, Syaoran then pressed the mute button,

"Mom, I want to make a wish there, please, just this once lets go there?" he pleaded, showing his puppy dog eyes,

"Alright, we'll leave tomorrow okay? Pack your things up now, we'll go there tomorrow morning" with that she left and called Wei to arrange all the things necessary to be used for their trip tomorrow,

The next day-Airport-

Syaoran quickly boarded their private plane and then, after sometime, the plane took off, the ride was smooth, after several hours they made it to their destination, they boarded the limo that was waiting for them, the limo drove them to their hotel, in which Wei had arranged yesterday for them to stay, Syaoran couldn't wait, he again pleaded Yelan to go there, and Yelan nodded she sent some bodyguards with him, and then they drove off to the temple,

Tomoeda-Kinomoto Temple-

Syaoran reached his destination and quickly jumped off the limo, he ordered his body guards to stay there, his mother had taught him some Japanese so he need not to worry about how he can communicate with the people on the temple, he ran up past the steps and then he was greeted by the monk he saw on the television,

"Good morning Mister Keito," Syaoran said in Japanese fluently and bowed courteously, the monk bowed in reply,

"What brings you here ?" asked Keito,

"I'm here to make a wish for my birthday," Syaoran replied,

"Oh, so you have seen the news, well, come to the main hall and we'll pray there," Keito stated, Syaoran nodded, and he followed him quietly, he's looking around searching for the girl he saw on the television, they reached the main hall in no time, they entered the main hall and then they removed their foot ware, they kneeled, Syaoran prayed for his intentions and then he wished, he wished that he'd met the girl that will make him happy for the rest of his life, after his prayers, they left the main hall,

"Oh I almost forgot, what is your name?" Keito asked,

"Oh! I'm so sorry for my rudeness, my name is Li Syaoran," he said politely

"My, my how polite, would you like to come inside and have a little chat?" Keito asked,

"Are you sure?" Syaoran asked, Keito nodded and Syaoran followed him to their quarters,

Kinomoto Temple-Living Room-

The two were laughing chatting about something,

"So Syaoran what did you wished or pray for at the temple? You seemed sincere about your wish," Keito stated,

"Well .. its about my life in Hong Kong," he lied, Keito knew that he was lying, he can somehow tell that he was lying,

sound of sliding door opening

"Hi unlce Keito," a girl with auburn locks and emerald pools went inside "Uncle I didn't know you have a visitor," Sakura stated pertaining to Syaoran, Syaoran flushed while looking at her, She's wearing a pink miniskirt and a white sleeveless shirt with some designs on it, she was carrying a backpack which means she just got home from her school, she was wearing a red hat that made her look like a tomboy, but just suits her well, Syaoran was on a daze and didn't notice the girl was walking closer to her, "Hi there" Syaoran snapped out of his daze and moved back a little, "Hoe ..?" She said, the girl walked closer to Syaoran, he flushed as she look at him,

"H-hi" he muttered, she giggled

"Hello, my name's Sakura Kinomoto, what's yours?" She asked,

"He's Syaoran Li," Keito cut in

"Nice to meet you Li," She said,

"Nice to meet you too" Syaoran said flushing,

That's how they first met personally, everyday Syaoran would go there even if he had to walk, just to see her he made sacrifices which he didn't do before, he had been nice to her and so was she, they played, ate, chatted, and shared each other's secret, and 2 days before Syaoran's birthday he did an unbelievable thing,

Flashback of Flashback- (A/N : I know its weird but work with me people work with me here!)

Tomoeda-Tomoeda Park-July 11-

Sakura and Syaoran were eating together at the park, he was wearing a loose shirt with 2 stripes horizontally on his sides, he asked her yesterday if they could go have a picnic on the park, and of course her reply was a yes, at the park, Syaoran was eating a cake and so was Sakura, the cake was so well prepared, it had lots of chocolate sprinkles, half of the cake was chocolate flavored and the other half was strawberry, Syaoran knew that her favorite flavor is strawberry even thought they only knew each other for a very short time, they were like the perfect couple, but Syaoran knew that she only looked up to her as a friend, but he was wrong, she had somehow developed some feelings for him, at that time you could say that he was only capable of being cute and not yet handsome, sexy or whatever, then he said –

"Sakura, I-can I be –" Syaoran was flushing more and more ferociously,

"What Li-kun?" She asked,

"Uhmm- I –I – I – can I be your b-bo-bo" Syaoran stammered,

"Why are you stammering Li-kun?" She asked again being naïve and dense,

"Sakuracanibeyourboyfriend?" Syaoran said with one breath, Sakura processed what Syaoran said and then her face darkened, her bangs hiding her emotions, Syaoran saw a tear sprung down from her cheek, he hated it when girls cry, it made him felt a stupid loser, for he can do nothing about it, he stood up and started to walk away, but a hand stopped him from doing so, Syaoran looked back, and saw a Sakura smiling in tears,

"Of course, Li-kun," She started, "but don't you think its awkward, we've just met a couple of days ago and now you're asking for my approval, and we are still on the age of seven …," Sakura explained,

"Sakura, call me Syaoran, only you and my family members can call me that remember okay?" Syaoran said, that was the happiest moment of his life, he cant compare it to any other thing that had happened to him, he wiped the tears from Sakura's cheek with his thumb, then they continued their picnic,

End of Flashback of Flashback- (A/N: I know it sounds stupid don't worry I'm looking for a new name XD)

The seal passed through him, and he was thrown onto the stone, then he fell unconscious, Sakura ran after him, knowing the danger, she still came to his side, Keito picked him up and rushed to the temple, he laid him on the bed inside Sakura's room, Keito went outside and called his parents and then he left to get some towel and a bucket of water, Sakura kneeled beside him, holding his hand with both her hands, she cried screaming his name (I know that they're still young, but you'll know why they're like this in the future so keep reading okay?),

After sometime-Kinomoto Temple-Sakura's Room-

There were 4 people on the room, one laying unconsciously on the bed, another one was talking to a woman, explaining what had happened, the woman was very frustrated at what news she was hearing, the girl was there puffy eyed crying about what was happening,

"PLEASE! Again! Tell me what happened to my son?" The woman hissed, Sakura stood up and said –

"A demon is inside him," She stated and broke into tears again,


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