Max: I fixed up the prologue! (Smiles happily) I told ya'll I would fix up this story! lol I'm trying to stick as close to the original plot as possible while rearranging the whole thing to make it less... Um... Whatchamacallit... Scattere I guess you could say. There are to many plot twigs in the oiginal and I need tocut out th un-needed ones. I WILL keep the main plots though! Don't worry about that! I might need to cut out the Yami, Yugi, Anzu thing though. Well, most of it at least. It's to urelated to the main plot. Well, hope you like the revised addition!

Warning: Kidnapping? Oo

Disclaimer: Yeah. Right. I wish I owned Yu-Gi-Oh! XD lol To bad I don't... (Cooks up evil little plot bunnies)Joey stood, looking out the large window, watching as the villagers puttered around doing their jobs, when a large bang resounded through the thrown room. A frantic guard running up to his Pharaoh.


Pharaoh Joey: Prologue

"Pharaoh!" the tall young guard exclaimed, pausing to catch his breath, "Your majesty! I have terrible news! The Princess, your sister, she has been taken! The gate watchers tried to run after the criminals, but they got away! It's Tristan that has taken her your majesty!"

Fear overcame the poor Pharaoh as his face turned a deathly white, "He took my sister? What have I done to deserve such treatment?! Ra, tell me what I have done wrong! Tell me and I will fix it!"

The Pharaohs advisor walked forward briskly, standing in front of the distraught man, "Sire, you must calm yourself. This is a grave situation, but you are going to become ill from worry."

Joey looked upon his advisor, a short chubby man, with great hatred, "You want me to calm down? I lost my wife and son to that terrible man, and now he has my sister! I refuse to calm down when the only family I have left is soon to be taken from me! Neither my daughter nor I, need to go through anymore death! Now get out! Inform the priests to begin searching the city for that scoundrel! I want him dead!"


Max: Well! That's the revised editon prologue for ya! (Huggles) Tata!

Lovies,

Mr. Max