Yea! I got enough reviews that said they liked it so I guess I'll publish more of my poems. This one is in Fabian's POV and it's basically his feelings towards Nina. Okay but first reviewer replies to One Word.
Curious . Panther . 87 : I didn't mean to copy what you did; I actually wrote this quite a while ago, before you even published Life is Hard. But I'm glad you liked it :) That means a lot :)
A Reviewing Reader: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Actually, there wasn't meant to be dashes. I left spaces between the letters for a visual effect. It's a technique I've kind of acquired over the years :)
MiaAndOak: Thank you for agreeing with the lack of reviews! I'm glad you liked it :) And WHY DIDN'T YOU BRING OAK? Jk jk (:
DISCLAIMER: Guess who owns House of Anubis? NOT ME!
I give her my sweatshirt
And she s m i l e s.
That smile that could light up a midnight sky.
Then she b l u s h e s.
That beautiful rosy pink color.
It always makes me blush in return.
Doesn't she know how I feel?
Can't she tell that my heart's beating fast?
Partly from fear of being caught.
Partly because I'm with h e r.
But then we're s a f e.
The moment's gone.
She's not holding me anymore,
Clutching me for protection.
We say goodnight.
She tries to return my sweatshirt.
But I let her k e e p it.
And when she leaves she's still wearing it.
Maybe-?
Could she-?
No.
After all,
It's only a sweatshirt.
Um, I'm more confident with this oneā¦but still. Please review and let me know what you think.
~Love
