Hey everyone! This is my new fanfic... its not my first, but its better than the others i've written... no the others i've written aren't up on cuz they sucked basically. Please review this, Constructive Criticism is welcome but flames aren't. Lemme know what you think i should improve on. Well cyall and i'm already almost done with the next chapter.
Oh and f.y.i the italics mean that she's communicating with her audience, you know like she wrote it down in a journal or something.
Sacrificing
chapter 1
My name is Abigail Williams and my world changed the day I learned to sacrifice.
You see before that day, I acted very much the part of a plantation owners spoiled daughter. For that was what i was. I was always scolding my younger brothers for behaving inadeqautly to what society expected of them. Mind you, I loved my family very much, but in my mind society and my own future came first.
You may ask why i was this way. Well it was because of my mother. She of course was a perfect lady, but that was only an outward appearance. My mother was a cold women. She never cared for her own children. A split second after the child was born from her womb, it was in the arms of a slave and hardly ever seen by my mother again.
When i was younger, I always looked up to my mother. I wished to be just like her. I thought her to be the most ladylike and beautiful women ever. But as i grew older, a sense grew in me that something was amiss with my mother. At the age of eighteen I came to realize what was wrong with my mother. My eighteenth birthday is where our story begins.
