Ah the remake! Is this any better, just because the last one was really bad because of the crappy one line spaces.


Deep inside,
Someone was drawling.
Deep inside,
Another was calling.
Deep inside,
They both had a war.
Deep inside,
The Dark has beaten the Law.

Somewhere inside,
Someone was dying.
Somewhere inside,
The other was sighing.
Somewhere inside,
Someone was cracking.
Somewhere inside,
The Dark is now cackling.

Inside his mind,
He was feeling the guilt.
Inside his mind,
He felt his sanity tilt.
Inside his mind,
His life has now ended.
Inside his mind,
The insanity is mended.


Reviews are welcome if you want. The original story is still being updated as we speak and I hope you enjoy any that you read.