"In The Deserted Clearing"

"Hello" the desperate she-cat calls out… her call rings through the bramble fronds.

She starts to cry when a shadow touches the silky fur of her rosy-cream pelt, suddenly; a shadowy creature creeps out of a bush and creeps out. She has heard the calls- she is an unknown creature no one knows about. People call her Shadedheart.

"Who...are you" the she-cat asked we now see she is Everwild.

The creature's wolf-like yellow eyes gaze around the dark, formerly deserted clearing. She replies in a steady voice,

"Your almighty master - Shadedheart."

"I am Everwild" she replies, even though her voice is steady her caramel eyes looked paler than they were

The strange creature everyone calls Shaded's eyes dart wildly around the clearing, as if another creature could jump out at any moment. She takes a step forth, making only a very faint, barely audible sound with her steps. She narrows her eyes, but not angrily...

WHAT WILL HAPPEN?please review