Hello peoples!!!!!!!My name is s-chan and this is my first story/chapter/fanfiction I've ever written!!read and review!! I will do the best I can to be a wonderful author!! Give me constructive criticism and I will put you in s-chan mode!!!
Chapter one: A death of a heart.
staring… at the blank page before you
A woman in a flowing dress. A spotlight shone down on her as she sang her song.
open up the dirty window… let the sun illuminate the worst that you cannot find…
She was beautiful. Hair as white as a summer orchid,
reaching… for something in the distance… so close you can almost taste it…
Her dress as black as a cloudy night sky,
release your innovations… feel the rain on your skin…no one else can feel it for you…
Her song suddenly stopped.
"Why," she asked, "why have you stopped me?"
"This Shessoumaru has done no such thing."
She tuned and glared at him. As her ice blue eyes burned into him, he felt as if he were melting…
"You will."
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"Inuyasha!" Kagome said, terrified. She had just finished a weekend of rest and refueling on supplies. After walking from the well to the road she discovered Inuyasha, his eyes glowing red.
"kagome." He said, seething.
Something was terribly wrong. Then she saw the smoke behind him,… and the blood on his claws.
"Inuyasha," she said loathfully,"what happened? Tell me!"
"I will explain."
No. That voice. 'she wouldn't have…' Turning around, kagome saw her.
"Kikyo."
"I have almost won. Inuyasha has promised his life to me. He will do anything I say, just like the good little dog he is. He will even kill you…. Right my little puppy?" She said as she walked behind him and caressed his cheek.
He stared dumbly on.
"Bitch. What did you do?!" kagome said, her guard raised.
"Oh nothing, I just told him to burn the village… after he murdered all of your little friends." She said with an evil smile on her face.
"No…" Kagome choked.
" oh yes. Now all who is left is you. Kill her, inuyasha."
A sudden anger brought on by hate and suffering burned into her.
"Go to hell! The both of you!!!!" Kagome screamed. She started to run towards the well, but inuyasha was faster. "Today you die wench." He said. Her heart broke.
He grabbed her arm and yanked her to the ground, his weight on top of her crushing her ribs. She screamed.
As he sat back and fell off of her, she got up and started to run again.
"Come back here!!!" Kikyo screamed. She shot off an arrow aimed at Kagome's head
Suddenly a big wall of fur rammed into kagome. The last thing she heard was one of her ribs cracking.
'crap'
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sigh
'ooh lookie! He's showing emotion!'
'Shut…up…'
' king of ice hates to sign papers does he?'
And indeed he did. Sitting in his office was the least favorite thing in his day. But, he didn't know what was his favorite. Or if he had one.
'I think you need a girlfriend you can obsess over, shower with presents, mate with…."
growl
'okay okay. Sheesh, grumpy.'
Okay im done for the moment… tell me what you think and review.Im still debating on whether or not to make this a koga and kags or shess and kags. I have plans for both so review and vote!!!
