I had to write a poem for english class and this is what I did for my sonnet. Care to give me a grade? Cer came up with the pairing name of Zuthi (or Rylar, which ever floats your boat)

The Balled of Zuthi

Let me tell you the tale of the world's strangest duet

Which consists of a girl and a boy

The boy's memories he did forget

And for the girl, danger is just a toy

But yet their lives are stranger still

Though the boy lost his past, he held onto his heart

And though her problems were far from nil

The girl was tricky, clever, and smart

But they weren't always together

The boy fell to the dark side

But he really couldn't forget her

His love had never died

He could never attack

The girl he loved with all his soul

Eventually, his heart came back

And this is what he told

"Our troubles are far from over, that much is true

but all I want to know, is that I love you."

Grade me?