Hey! So I finally have the first chapter up. I know some of you that read this before i had my account hacked have been waiting for this so here it is. Thirteen years later.

Dylan: Just post the stupid thing already

Me: Oh shut up.I'm still giving them info. Anyway. Check out Complete and Utter Randomness. There will be some short storied going up soon. watch for that and enojoy the chapter.

Dylan: She doesn't own any of Pjo or Mr.

Me: Oh duh. I totally forgot. Why do i keep doing that?

Dylan: yeah why do you?

Me: Oh would you shut up so i can post the darn thing?

Enjoy...


Torn II

Chapter 1: Jackie's POV

"Dad!" I called and grabbed my machete and armor. "Come ON! Its about to start!" My dad ran out and threw on his shirt. For a twenty-seven year old demigod he was in good shape.

"I'm coming. I'm coming." He pulled on his boots and stood up. "Where's your brother?"

"Dad." I whined. "He's seven. Why does he get to play Capture the Flag? You didn't let me come until I turned thirteen three months ago."

"Because I can't very well leave him with Hades or Ares while your mother is away on business now can I? Now get going." He went to grab Nick/

"Come on!" I ran toward the woods and joined up with Claire and Anna. "Sorry. I'm here. Where's our team set up?"

"Ares, Hephaestus, and the Big Three are blue which means you are with us. Athena and everyone else are red." Claire said. "Not fair numbers, but the skills are pretty matched." Anna commented.

"Hey. We're here." Dad Said and put on his sword. "Man, I'm getting too old for the." He said and Percy came over.

"Nico, if you're old, I'm ancient." Percy greeted my dad. Being 31 Percy still had it. Six-pack and everything. I know he's married to Annabeth. My mom used to tell me that two weeks after she married Nico, Percibeth became married."

"So where is Alex?" He asked.

"She had a little business to take care of." My dad said. Percy nodded. "She should be back tonight."

"Hey." Annabeth strolled up and kissed Percy." So you ready to have you're Asses kicked?" She smiled. "Hey Jackie. Nice to finally meet you."

"Oh yeah. Percy told me you were up on Olympus overseeing the finishing touches." I smiled.

"She was goen for almot a year." Percy said and pulled Annabeth close. "Thought I'd almost die." She started making out until Shannon, their daughter, came toddling up.

"Jackie, Jackie!" The little five year old came running up with a fake sword and armor. "I be on your team!"

"Hey Shannon!" I knelt down and straightened the helmet on her hair. "That's be great, Shan. But you know what? I have a quest for you. Very top secret, hush-hush type. But fist I need to know if you're up to it."

She stood straight and saluted.

"I whispered it in her ear and her small face lit up. "Now you can't tell anyone, Okay?" I put my finger to my lips. "Sh. Now get. Your quest awaits."

Shannon scurried off and I stood up. Percy groaned and took a gold drachma out of his pocket.

"Thank you." I took it and put it in my pocket. Annabeth just stared at me. "Long story.

"Campers! Places!" Chiron shouted.

We all hurried off in different direction. "Jackie, keep your brother close." Dad shouted after me and I rolled my eyes.

"Come on, Nick." I spread my thirteen-foot wings and pushed down hard, feeling them collect air and lift me off the ground.

I loved my wings. They were brown but faded into my secondaries that had black snaked in. They were beautiful.

Nick joined me in the air. He and only and Eight foot wingspan. His were mostly brown but his secondary feathers were a darker mahogany.

"Come on." I shot toward the other side, dodging chariots and arrows. I dropped down to their flag and took down six campers. Just as I had my hand on the flag the horn blew. "Damn it!" I took Nick and Met my dad back at the creek.

There stood Annabeth, holding the flag, looking smug.,

"Red team wins!" Chiron announced and looked down at me. "now every one head to the fire for the sing along!" He put his hand on my shoulder and nodded to my dad. Nick toddles behind us as we made our way toward the big house.


"Chiron what is this about?" Nico asked as we walked into the Ping-pong room.

"Why must there be something wrong for me to talk to you?" Chiron asked calmly.

Dad gave him a look.

Chiron sighed. "Fine. You're father wants a word but he can't reach you and we don't know why. There must be something wrong."

"I can't leave Jackie and Nick here."

"Why not?" I asked. "I'm a big girl. I can take care of myself, and Nick. Mom was on her own at eleven. I'm thirteen."

Dad sighed. "How many times must we go over this? You are not your mother and just by the small part I know you will never go through what she did. Now you will stay with me until I say otherwise. Got it?"

I crossed my arms ad mumbled. "Got is"

There was a knock at the door and my mother walked in. "Hey. What'd I miss?" Her wings were still out, cooling off from no doubt a long flight.


So I'll have the next chapter up as soon as i can. -Please R&R and i will update sooner! also all of you who wanted Nico to get "something" that made him more like Alex... YOu know what i'm talking about. Anway. You're gonna get your wish just keep your peaches in the bowl. I will get back to you as soon as i can. And feel free, anyone, to give me some ideas for the story or a new one. Pm me. If you don't have an account you can reach me also at Justplainpain so thanks and I hope you'll review.

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