Hey. I'm new to fanfiction. Please don't be too harsh but tell me what you think. Also give me some ideas on wat should happen further on.
Disclaimer: I do not own anything except the plot.
Prologue
Why had it all gone wrong on that one day? That one terrible, fateful day.
I was walking home that terrible day. It was an ordinary day, no different than any other. School had just gotten out and I figured I had just bombed my Spanish test. My best friend offered me a ride home. Oh how I wish I had accepted that ride home. Instead I had told him I was going to walk. He kept on telling me I should let him take me home, he's always sweet like that. However, I just kept refusing. Now I wish I had just let him take me home, but it was too painful and at the time, it seemed right. I couldn't take to jokes anymore, or the heartache for that matter. Oh how much I wished for it to stop, but sadly, they wouldn't. Nobody would stop the comments or the jokes. I decided to take matters into my own hands. I just stopped hanging out with him so much. It wasn't that hard either, because he was always with his girlfriend. Now you must be wondering who this "he" is, well it's my best friend and secret crush, Jack Brewer. I'm getting off topic.
As I was saying, I was walking home. It was a cold December day in Seaford and looked like it would pour down rain at any minute. You must be wondering why I was walking in weather like this. Well the answer is I like this kind of weather, there's something in the air that I like. I don't know if it's the air or just the way my surroundings look. It just gives me this vibe that I like. I didn't live too far from school, maybe four miles. I lived on a farm near town, weird I know. My family has lived on this farm for generations and I honestly loved it. It was cool because the town had kinda grown near it. There was a neighborhood right next to the small field next to my house. It was where all my friends lived. It wasn't hard to get there, so we got to hang out a lot. Then right across from that neighborhood was a strip mall that I always hung out at.
I liked it when I walked home, it gave me time to think. I was walking along the road about a mile from my house when IT happened.
Now you may be wondering what that IT is. Well, I guess I'll tell you, but let's start from the beginning.
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Starlite24
