This here is my Second Poem and the character is suppose to be Botan, but she's OOC in the poem I guess. I don't own YuYu Hakusho no matter how much I wish I did.


Behind this perfect smile I am broken up inside
Within me I feel nothing but my Sadness that resides

Through my bubbly outer shell and through my perky voice
A cry for desperate help can be heard as soundless noise

My friends don't see the loneliness that I had start to feel
They don't notice my sanity that begins to slowly peal

They don't see my perfect smile start to chip away
Or the fact that I recently have begun to start a stray

The blade I use to slash my wrists glistens with wet red
I stare at the colour as it begins to stain my bed

Every time this wound has healed a deeper cut is made
Until the last ounce of life I have is a dwindle that will fade

Another slash is made but now I go down the road
My mind leaves back my body in my lonely cold abode

I wonder what will happen when the deity of death
Begins to die and has to takes his or her last breathe?

Where do the likes of me go to after life?
A place of peace and tranquility or a place that's filled with strife?

I close my eyes as every thought comes to a slothful stop
As my spirit energy lowers to nothing but a drop

My head feels light and my mind is like a haze
I know I'm on the brink of death because now's the final phase

My last thoughts are of my friends and how my good byes weren't said
But it's now to late to fix that why? Why because I'm dead

By: Vines


I hope youlike the poem I wrote with my not so good but not so bad writing skills. Don't take the poem whether it's bad or good please and review review review! Don' flame though, constructive criticism is welcomed and I'll try my best to use suggestions given to me.