This is just the prolouge to this story. I'm not going to go into details on this story just yet
I first want to know if you like it or not. WARNING- if you like Li as the good guy then
maybe you shouldn't read this story it is more of a S+Y story. I Like the title but do you
think I should change it?
Prolouge- Caged Heart
She stood awake by her window watching over the moon. She looked at her wedding
band and then turned her attention to the numbers on her watch. He was 15 minutes late,
he was never late. She sighed as she started to feel her emerald eyes go blurry she wiped
them clean and decided to go to bed. He wasn't coming not tonight, As she was starting
to close her eyes she felt someone enter her room. But she wasn't frightened, she was
relieved as she felt his warm aura. " You came" she said. "Of course I did, why wouldn't
I come and visit my Cherry Blossom" the mystery person answered. " Your late, your
always here on time Yue" ( bet you didn't see that one coming ^_^ ) "I'm sorry Sakura
but I was being followed by someone in a black cloat on my way here, might have just
been some thief but I didn't want to use my powers around him so I walked all the way
..." He was quieted down with a long and passionate kiss from Sakura. " Come to bed
lover and tommorow you can continue your story"
They slipped into bed not sencing that they were being watched by a pair of angry Amber
eyes. " That little ....." was all that was heard. " I told you master, she's been seeing that
traitor, Yue behind your back" said the guy in the black cloat. " What are your plans for
her Master?" he asked. "Time will tell Raven, time will tell" answered King Li with a
huge grin across his face.
So how was it? This is the first time that I write a Fan-fic. Remember that this is just the
prolouge I want to get some reviews- No Flamez- I don't think my tender heart would be
able to handle it ^_^ j/k
Please a couple reviews just so I know that I'm doing a good job and should continue or
that I'm doing a crappy job and should quit right away.Should I change the title?
Suggestions please (\_/)
(^.^)
(``)(``)
I first want to know if you like it or not. WARNING- if you like Li as the good guy then
maybe you shouldn't read this story it is more of a S+Y story. I Like the title but do you
think I should change it?
Prolouge- Caged Heart
She stood awake by her window watching over the moon. She looked at her wedding
band and then turned her attention to the numbers on her watch. He was 15 minutes late,
he was never late. She sighed as she started to feel her emerald eyes go blurry she wiped
them clean and decided to go to bed. He wasn't coming not tonight, As she was starting
to close her eyes she felt someone enter her room. But she wasn't frightened, she was
relieved as she felt his warm aura. " You came" she said. "Of course I did, why wouldn't
I come and visit my Cherry Blossom" the mystery person answered. " Your late, your
always here on time Yue" ( bet you didn't see that one coming ^_^ ) "I'm sorry Sakura
but I was being followed by someone in a black cloat on my way here, might have just
been some thief but I didn't want to use my powers around him so I walked all the way
..." He was quieted down with a long and passionate kiss from Sakura. " Come to bed
lover and tommorow you can continue your story"
They slipped into bed not sencing that they were being watched by a pair of angry Amber
eyes. " That little ....." was all that was heard. " I told you master, she's been seeing that
traitor, Yue behind your back" said the guy in the black cloat. " What are your plans for
her Master?" he asked. "Time will tell Raven, time will tell" answered King Li with a
huge grin across his face.
So how was it? This is the first time that I write a Fan-fic. Remember that this is just the
prolouge I want to get some reviews- No Flamez- I don't think my tender heart would be
able to handle it ^_^ j/k
Please a couple reviews just so I know that I'm doing a good job and should continue or
that I'm doing a crappy job and should quit right away.Should I change the title?
Suggestions please (\_/)
(^.^)
(``)(``)
