I know that people are reading my stories and I would really appreciate feedback.
Shaitlyn[kinda] implied Naitlyn, Smitchie
She sat silently, daintily
Heartbroken
Alone
The one guy she ever wanted
[Needed]
[Loved]
Loved someone else
[Left her]
For someone [else]
"Caitlyn?"
"Yeah Shane?"
"Why do you think they couldn't tell us?"
[A shrug.]
"I don't know Shane…'for each their own'"
[Two sighs in unison.]
Almost unnoticeable glances
[Identical thoughts.]
Maybe everything will be fine.
Please review. I'd like to know what I need to work on.
