I know that people are reading my stories and I would really appreciate feedback.

Shaitlyn[kinda] implied Naitlyn, Smitchie

She sat silently, daintily

Heartbroken

Alone

The one guy she ever wanted

[Needed]

[Loved]

Loved someone else

[Left her]

For someone [else]

"Caitlyn?"

"Yeah Shane?"

"Why do you think they couldn't tell us?"

[A shrug.]

"I don't know Shane…'for each their own'"

[Two sighs in unison.]

Almost unnoticeable glances

[Identical thoughts.]

Maybe everything will be fine.

Please review. I'd like to know what I need to work on.