Author's Note: This is a project I started on about three years ago. I stopped writing about two years ago, so if you see sudden changes in writing style, it's probably because I am going to continue it now. I originally was intending to create a book from this. Then I woke up and decided I would just use this to test out my writing abilities. Now, that's enough pretext I guess. Please, just read and enjoy (I hope). One last thing, in case you can't tell, and if you can't I suggest you talk to a neurologist immediately, I have taken copious amounts of terminology and names from certain anime.
Disclaimer: None of the names or terminology belong to me. They are all just influences from Kishimoto, and various other manga-ka's.
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Chapter 1
The Accident
"Great Air Bellow" bellowed my sensei.
"Oof"
The ground felt cold and hard as I hit the ground with a solid thump from the air bellow attack I took from my sensei in the chest.
"Must you always be so rough, sensei?" I said, regaining my battle stance.
"Of course I must Donovan," replied my master with a grin, " I can still hardly believed you entered my apprenticeship with such poor skills though. I can't believe you talked me into becoming your master. Now let us continue your training."
I sighed while my sensei and I bowed to each other. These long training regimens that my sensei had imposed on me had seemed hard at first but now it was absolutely backbreaking labor with all the pain from the previous days.
The day would begin by being rudely woken up by my sensei, Sarutobi at around 4:30 in the morning. Then after getting dressed I have to go down the long winding paths from the top of the mountains to reach the river which winded through the Dajinn mountain range. I would then have to carry all the herbs, spices, vegetarian food (all monks in the village are required to be vegetarian) and the gallons of water found in and around the river, up to our village hidden in the clouds hugging the mountain, yet better known as Kohona. Next I would have to practice my swordsmanship, but it is truly more than that. Sarutobi and I practice Taien-Shou and Tainjutsu, basic and advanced forms of self-defense and defense of others. We also practice with staffs, spears, daggers, pikes, throwing stars, and all other types of weapons, however, it is against our religion to make others suffer.
After practicing with our weapons, which we had already done today, my sensei and I would spar with Taien-Shou, Tainjutsu, and the special monk forces that outsiders called "magic" but what we Kaiten monks call Jutsu using Konem which mixes body and spiritual energy, and use your hands, body, and enchanted spirit paper and scrolls to execute the Jutsu. In truth, this "magic" however, is little more than the ability that some are born with that give them the ability to bend, control, contort, summon, banish, and in any other way control the forces of nature. These forces consisted of light, fire, water, air, earth, darkness, metal, energy, and sound. We were doing this at the very moment. After that we would have breakfast and we would meditate while facing the rising sun. After that we would focus on practicing my Jutsu and strength until dinner. We would than thank our God to help us reach enlightenment as we sat still as stone facing
the setting sun in acknowledgment of the greater forces of the world. We would then go to sleep in our huts on our straw mats. However, for some strange reason my training has always been different and more severe than those of the others apprenticed and even sometimes higher up apprentice monks.
I looked around surveying the sparring field in which I was still not accustomed to. I was still used to fighting in the smaller field used for those who were not yet apprenticed. The sight beyond my master was beautiful and easy to get lost in. The view was that of looking down the mountains to see the beautiful valleys below and the preserved site of where one of our strongest warrior monk, Ryokotse fought and sacrificed himself to defeat the vicious dragon, Irotenkin. I looked for some way to use the landscape against my sensei. I saw none.
"Spar... begin" yelled my master.
"Hyaaaaaaaa, Lesser Flying Rock Jutsu" I cried screaming like a demon, while twisting my hands into several Jutsu seals.
"Ha," exclaimed my master," Don't even bother with such a weak attack." Sarutobi then stopped my attack with his own Jutsu throwing the rocks back at me with even greater momentum. One of them clipped me on the temple rendering me unconscious.
I awoke with a massive headache and with the kind yet strong eyes of my master facing mine.
" You need a lot more practice," he said with a smile. All I did was groan.
" Ohh well lets go continue, but this time try using your Jutsu scrolls, your skilled with those aren't you" he said?
Choosing randomly a scroll from my robe, I take out a scroll and open it up for its instructions. However, something was strange with this scroll. I never remembered acquiring it. As well as with the fact that this scroll had a seal on its open end. Carefully, I opened the spirit scroll to look at the instructions. They were some of the hardest seals I knew only because of my advanced training.
"Spar... begin" my sensei cried, already beginning his seals for his techniques.
" Oh no you don't" I yelled. I took out the scroll bit my finger till there was blood and wiped it on the scroll, then I started making seals as fast as I could.
All of a sudden Sarutobi yelled, " No, not that Jutsu."
Yet I still cried," Supreme Dark Summoning Jutsu."
All of a sudden there was a huge explosion and a deep voice screamed, " Finally, I'm free. All you monks will pay for locking me up."
Then a dark figure jumped away laughing with joy.
Then I simply stuttered, "What in heaven's holy name have I done?"
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Author's Note: Well, there you have it. This is my first ever fanfiction. Please review however you wish. All reviews are welcome. I hope you enjoyed it, and if you don't, then please tell me. Although, trust me when I say that this story is going to get better as time goes on. Trust me, I know that the beginning is a little weak, but I thought this up when I was only a high school freshman.
Since I am a Senior in High School, it will be difficult for me to update constantly, although I will do my best. Thank you all for reading.
