Hello everyone :)
This is my very first fic. and i'm really new to this so feel free to review
even though I only wrote this in 18 min. (yes, I do time myself :P ) hope you like it
In a world of no sorrows, no lies, no heartaches, and lastly no regrets, is where I want to be. Why can't it just be you and me? But I guess even when darkness strikes you won't be there. For all you think about is HER! Not me. Yes, I know. It may be hard to accept the fact that an average girl like me fell in love with the most lovable guy in the world. But who gave me hope? I'm pretty sure it's not me. Isn't it you from the start?
FLASHBACK
There I was, Happy like I always am. Enjoying how my hair danced with the cold breeze, tasting the salty air, hearing the sweet sounds of the waves hitting the shore. I was happy. But then, while observing the sea, I saw a figure ahead. With eyes like the sun, face like porcelain, I saw a god. I saw you. For a minute I can't breathe, I tried to speak but no words came out. Then I heard the most magnificent voice. It reached me, my soul, and my heart. With only just one word, things won't be the same ever again.
"Greetings"
As he went near, I looked around to see if he really was talking to me. No one was there. This was a good sign.
"May I help you sir?"
I asked, forcing words to come out of my mouth.
"Sorry to intrude"
He said as he gone near
"I am a traveler and wondered to your land with only my boat"
Maybe there's something by the way his hair falls down his face for my mind went totally blank
"I know it seems rude of me to ask a stranger for favors. But, may I ask for a week to be fed clothed and sheltered?"
This was out of the question! How can some stranger ask a waterbender favors with no fee! This was absurd, degrading, foolish, harebrained, idiotic, imbecilic, insane, lunatic, mad, moronic, nonsensical, preposterous, silly, tomfool, unearthly, zany, crazy, loony I can go on and on for i have a book full of thesaurus to describe this
… but how could I say no? My heart was winning. I can't bear it any longer.
"Come in quickly before I change my mind "
He smiled a smile that left me breathless. How can some stranger do this to me? it's like i'm under some kind of lovesick spell.
" My name is Katara by the way."
I said avoiding his face for I fear that I might get starstruck just by looking at him
"Zuko"
He said in a low whispering voice.
Isn't that the name of the prince in another nation? Maybe this name was common to travelers for there is no way that the prince of the brutal fire nation is this handsome!
End of chapter 1!
hope you enjoyed reading :)
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Thank you for letting me waste some of your valuable time :)
