This is my fic from quizilla that I believe, upset many of the readers (the few that read) with how the main character acted too perfect so I redid the whole story and now am posting this onto both sites. I would really appreciate the reviews so that I do not have another Mary Sue character again.

~xiaolinfan18~

This story takes place just after "Master Monk Guan" where they first meet Chase. Now I know that Chase did not go after the Wu first off so that would make this closer to the Senbini episode. I will be keeping close to the original story line but there are also going to be parts that have nothing to do with the original plot.

I do not own Xiaolin Showdown, the characters or the Wu.

Name: Hiyori "Raven" Tenshi

-Mysterious, Charismatic, funny, determined, and tomboyish.

-Hates extremely tall places-Has long, knee length hair with a couple of purple streaks in it, emerald green eyes, hour glass figure, and is 5' 8". On the top of her left arm is a chrysanthemum birthmark and a white tiger and snow leopard representing the ying yang symbol on her right shoulder.

-She is Kimiko's older cousin, by six years, on her mother's side. As kids, they played together and when they got into trouble, she would always receive the blame. Because of this, she is seen as the "black sheep" of the family. While she is still on good terms with Kimiko, they still haven't spoken in four years. At the age of 16, she moved to California to get away from everything and one night she stumbled onto a mystical fight club. This club was for magical beings and those that knew about them and she has been a member ever since. At 21, she is the leader of the White Tigers, one of the five main gangs in the U.S and uses her training in Fu Jao Pai, Shorinji Kempo (Shaolin temple Kempo), and Aikido, to her advantage.-She is the reincarnation of Dashi's younger sister, Ming HuaĆ­ (Tomorrow's Flower), and one of the first women accepted into the Xiaolin Temple. She got along with everyone at the temple but she and Chase Young got on each other's nerves constantly. Eventually, Ming HuaĆ­ and Chase grew closer together and when that happened, Dashi and Guan were there to tease the couple.

"I'm standing atop a giant cliff and time seems to slow down, zeroing in on the moment. Everything is surrounded by fog making the giant peach tree the only visible thing. The slight orange tint to the leaves closest to me show that it's the beginning of Fall. I am left with little time to discern my surroundings fore a dark laugh echoed all around me followed by glowing yellow eyes.'

I sat up in my bed noticing that I am covered in sweat and I notice the time is 8 in the morning. I flop back down onto my bed and covered my face with a pillow. "I so don't want to get out of bed." But the gnawing feeling that the dream would happen again if I went back to sleep flashed across my mind. 'Getting up it is.' Now it wasn't that I was afraid to go to sleep, it's just that for the past several weeks the dream has kept reoccurring. I have no time to dwell on such things when the tournament that we have planned for is tonight. I sighed. "What a depressing way to start the day."

-Meanwhile-

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