I have made some changes
1 Bardock is alive and a super saiyan 3
2All the saiyans in my story are good being raised by Bardock and Grandpa Gohan
3 Nappa is working with Frieza and survived but not with Vegeta he is working alone
4 Bardock will teach them how to control their ozaaru(Giant Great Ape)
Chapter 1:5 saiyans on Earth
Bardock decided to take himself,Kakarot a.k.a Goku,Raditz,Broly and his prince Vegeta to Earth because he saw that the planet is going to be destroyed by Frieza a cold-blooded tyrant he took them so some saiyans bardock ,Raditz and Prince Vegeta carrying Kakarot and Broly sat dow in their space pod and leave the Planet Vegeta.
One month later
The Planet Vegeta was destroyed by witnessing his friends death become super saiyan 1 and after witnessing his wifes death he transformed into super saiyan this happened Prince Vegeta calmed Bardock a man came to Bardock and says I will help you in raising them and I name that boy Goku pointing at then says thank you and yes Goku will be fine but we will call him Kakarot and my name is Bardock this is my first son Raditz my second son Kakarot as you call him Goku and this is Broy and this is our prince lets go to my that the remaning saiyans maked friends with Grandpa Gohan and they stayed at his house.
