I Do Not Own Death Note The Anime ,The Manga or the crap Movie I'm Just a Fan.
So the death note movie that came out and I thought to myself while I was bashing my head against the wall trying to get the movie to leave my memories after I watched it that I could do so much better than that multi million dollar movie piece of trash so here I am as I said I'm not sure that this will be good or if anyone would like it but still I have some spare time on my hands so I figure why not.
Now for what this story is about you most likely read the summary but this story mostly follows K my OC and I know that there is a K from one of the Movies but I'm not going to be using anything from the movies so I figured whatever as he helps L solve the Kira case. So this story will follow K in first person most of the time but there will be third person every now and again because what kind of death note story would it be if you didn't get the mental battles of does he know that I know that he knows.
Another thing don't expect a chapter to come out that common the story of death note is a complex and hard art to master with all the twist and plans that happened in them so it might take awhile to come up with the plot for a chapter and I think the reason that I burned myself out was because I forced myself to post as much as I did.
One thing that is going to be slightly is the fact that I don't like Near I like his design I like his personality mostly but I still don't really like him that much as a character so don't expect him to play a big role in this story like he did in the last couple of episodes to catch Light and if I decide to change that then his character is going to be changed to some degree. And don't think that L is going to be the boss of K that is going to be better explained in the story but K and L are equals not a successor or anything like that.
I have another reason as while for writing a death note story as you will tell this story is going to have a different format than my time for a power up story. I want to learn more about writing as you can tell I have a in my opinion good understanding of fight scenes at least I hope so.
Anyway so I am hoping this will be some good on the job learning for more mind games than action wars. Plus I want some diversity so writing two completely different genres of anime will be good to keep my mind from burning out again. Anyway time to start this overly long intro for this chapter see you at the bottom.
Chapter One
Heart Attacks.
Pov. K
As I looked down from the roof down to a street with a half dozen cop cars and five swat vans as the building that they were in front of was being swarmed. I sighed as I walked towards the door to head back to the hotel that I was staying at to solve that un-fulling case.
It wasn't that it was boring but the fact that it was to easy what group would in there right minds rob a bank after hacking into a local service announcement for the U.S. saying they wanted to take down the government then rob a bank. It was just dumb all you had to do is compare voice laps of the bank audio that the camera got and the announcement.
Not to mention the fact that using the term hacking is too nice one of the group members was a worker of the announcement service and happened to know how to pick the locks of the room where they record the audio which they send out. So really it was just a couple of idiots with a slight position to do something.
Anyway so using the worker's voice I ID'd him and then using that to link them to the crime afterwards it didn't take long before I could trace down the fake account that held the money the idiots didn't even use a fake account or anything so it didn't take long after that to find them and where they were.
As I was thinking to myself I heard a small mewl to the right of the door that headed down to the ground floor curiosite I walked to the side of the wall and looked around as the disappointing case was forgotten. There was nothing there but I heard the sound again but this time from above me as I moved my head up to the roof over the door I noticed a small very skinny kitten looking down at me appearing to be about to jump down.
It wasn't that dirty but it was pretty dark out and the small animal was black and yellow a weird color combo but with that I couldn't see how bad off it was at the moment. But I would see it when it jumped down so I waited as I looked at the small underweight cat which looked right back at me.
I waited a moment staring up at the small animal but they didn't move just still looking down at me from the small roof cover of the door and continued to mewl at me but it was louder than before. It didn't take a genius to figure out that the small thing was stuck so I raised my hand up to it and quickly grabbed it before it would run away as I knew the kitten wouldn't trust me.
It put up a small fight as I laid it against my chest to keep it warm as it was in the lower forties in temperature. The small thing scratched my chest a couple of times most likely because it felt trapped but after a minute it stopped and started to purr when I pet its head. I kinda wished I brought a jacket as my skinny body and thin clothes probably didn't give off enough heat for it.
Sighing to myself I circled the door's walls to see how they got trapped up there but after I walked around it I saw there was no way that it could get up there on it's own. Which meant some ass put it up there knowing that it couldn't get down what was wrong with people leaving a poor cat up there to die.
Sure technically I've met worst people rapist, serial killers, drug dealers, terrorist, arsonist just to name some. But to hurt something that can't defend itself that can't understand why that its happening to them it's just the worst. That's one of my quirks animals sure it not as weird as eating twenty pounds of sugar a day or sleeping with dozens of toys every night but it's still a quirk.
Shaking off the thoughts I held the cat in my hand as I began to walk down the stairs to get back to my hotel room there I could give it some food and some proper heat to warm it up. Something I couldn't do if my baggy shirt and the things that I had on my person.
With that I began to walk down the stairwell thinking about how boring life had been recently no good cases at least challenging ones. No government had asked for my help for awhile and I have just began to solve any case that seemed to a challenge but really all that entailed was just a day of many phone calls to police or some government tip line telling them where someone was or what actually happened.
Snapping out of my thoughts of the last day as I looked up at the hotel that I was currently staying at. I sighed as I opened the door and walked across the ground floor to the stairs I never had been one to use a elevator preferring just to walk. While on my challenge to climb the stairs to the ninth floor a couple was walking down the stair arguing about something.
The loudness of their voices woke the cat that was still held in my hand I noticed that the small thing trembled slightly at the loud noises. They might had a owner that was always yelling at it or something else there probably the one that left it on the roof to die why are people so nasty to something that can't hurt them. Looking away from the cat I focused back on the ones that were making the noise
They were two people a woman and a man. The man had short black hair with light blue eyes he looked to be in his late twenties while the women had long black hair and hazel eyes and to be also in her late twenties. So most likely husband and wife judging that they both had rings on recent to as you could tell from the tones this was their first fight as a couple and states of both the rings, new.
Not really caring enough to study them any more as they stopped interesting me I mentally blocked them out. A skill which I found came in handy when being yelled at for not taking a case from whoever or whichever government that needed me. But the women of the two noticed me she called to me and said right before we passed stopping so that I couldn't pass and just ignore her.
"Hey you can you help us for a minute my name is Naomi Misora and this jerk here is my soon to be husband Raye Penber and we are having a argument and he refuses to try and sort it out like adults?" I wanted to sigh and just walk passed but I could tell that would just lead to more problems as the man of the two looked ready to hit something and I didn't feel like getting in a fight with the kitten on me.
So I bit my tongue and respond in my normal voice of boredom "I guess I could help solve a argument what happened?" I knew they knew I didn't what to be here but she apartly didn't care as she didn't miss a beat and said. "Well you see I wanted to go visit my parents but this guy is to wrapped up in his work saying that they can't afford to travel all the way there"
I could tell that this was going to take a while as Raye cut her off and said why they couldn't just go "I would love to met them both but I have cases to help solve and I'm already on a short lease with my boss as it is so I can't just go and ask for two full weeks off and I'm going to have to ask for time off for are wedding so I can't ask for some before that you're retired now but I'm not."
As he talked I decided to get this over with and studied what they said with the location that we were at. 'He works with the FBI I can tell with the 'I have to help solve cases' she must have been one to and if not she should have I can tell she is smart but what to say. Raye is right if they don't have the time or ability to do so without major consequences to them they can't just up and leave.
They could just wait till a job opens so he can go to wherever her parents are and just bring her along there is no rule against that or he could just schedule a long time off during the time of the wedding and use that as a cover. Or if they were smart they could just wait till there damn wedding and then just invite them then that would be the best time for it to.
Thinking back to what I just I sighed to myself thinking that I needed to get some coffee I don't really like coffee but I hate sleep more so many things are wasted while you sleep it lowers your deductive powers after a while but that doesn't really happen till two weeks at the best of times and I have only been up for five days so I'll be fine.
Shaking off that thought I snapped my fingers in front of the two bickering adults who were fight like children. After I got there attention I said to them in a bored tone like always "Just wait till you get a case in where her parents are wherever that is then take it or just invite them to the wedding it can't be that far away from know and it would offer less risk with your job."
With that I pushed my way passed them up to the finale set of stairs to my hall that held the room of mine for the night. As I walked to the door and opened it I walked in and headed over to my chair. When I sat down I raised one of my legs to join me on my chair like I always did while the other was on the floor. Once I was comfortable enough I placed the sleeping cat on the table in front of me.
I laid my elbow on the left arm rest as I covered my left cheek my hand as I laid my head against the hand on the arm rest. After a couple of minutes I stood back up and walked to the small kitchen. As I walk into the small room I grabbed a bowl and some milk from the fridge and walked
As I sat back into my chair I waited a moment then grabbed the milk and opened the carton once it was opened I placed the bowl right next to small animal the poured some milk in the bowl so it had something to eat when it woke up. After a second I turned on the computer in front of me on the table.
Deciding to look for any interesting crimes that were happening or if a contact found something on a side project that I was working on. After a couple of minutes I found a case where a husband was going to go to jail because everyone thought he killed his wife. It didn't look to hard but I needed something to do so I downloaded the case file and began to read threw the case notes.
I started with the autopsy to find out what it was that that made the police suspect the husband over trying to find anyone else who could kill her. The reports and pictures show that she was stabbed in the chest three time with a large knife and each stab was going up and down side by side with a inch a part from each other.
So the wife died after one stabbing but the not only killer stabbed her twice more but measured were to stab and how far to stab the knife into her chest in correlation with the first stab. That to obsessive to do and after cross checking a couple of things with the husband he didn't have OCD.
Nor did he have any blood on him that belonged to his wife that you could get by opening her chest and measuring the wound to replicate twice over. And I doubt he could be peice enough to get the right measurements the first time so they would have had to check each wound at least twice to make sure there stabs were the same.
When you add this into the time frame which the husband would had to kill her it could work. He had gotten off of work at 7:30pm and then reported the death to the police at 8:05pm and with the distance between his house and the place of work it would have a rough estimate taken him at best 25 minutes to reach his home.
With a ten minute window for him to enter and kill his wife then measure the wound then redo it twice over measuring it to match the killing stab then call the police. Here it said that the police arrived at 8:16pm so that means he cleaned himself off the blood replaced his clothes with the exact same suit that he wore to work and hide the bloody clothes somewhere that no one found.
It simply wasn't not possible he wasn't smart enough to do any of this with the very slim time frame he had. Plus the fact that he would have that ten minute window is very small to achieve the roads near where he lives are normally very crowded with cars so it would have been very unlikely that he would get there at the best amounted time possible.
Then kill her with the stab wound wait till she bleed out then replicate the wound clean himself of all blood and change hide the bloody clothes while disposing of the murder weapon as it wasn't found in the 21 minutes he had alone to deal with his wife. Sometimes the police surprise me with how dumb they can be.
After making a quick call to the station under one of my alias that was known to take cases with or without permission and explained to them why they all were morons. After a couple of minutes on the phone I was talking to the head of the case explaining why they had the wrong guy and also told them what characterics they could use to find the killer.
Around a hour later I heard a ding from my computer as a notification popped up. Clicking on it I found myself in front of a website of the police station and on the top of the page in a very newpaper way read in big bold letters.
HUSBAND CLEARED, INVESTIGATION OPENED ONCE MORE
Under the headline it talked about how 'the police came across some facts that proved the suspect couldn't have done it.' Of course they took credit for my work but I didn't mind hell I told them if they wanted it they could have it. I looked at the kitten still sleeping next to me as I looked at the time.
It had been two and a half hours give or take to clear him so one hour till it was announced a hour or so on the phone talking to the police so it took me around a half hour to get the facts to clear him. If I had to guess it would take another hour and a half to catch the real killer but I could leave that to the police.
I told them everything they need to know to catch the killer and the area where the killing happened wasn't that big so the police force wouldn't have to much trouble to find a slightly if not more mentally unstable person that had OCD and or a history of violence but then again they aren't that bright as they arrested someone that couldn't have done it.
A couple of hours pass and I decided after playing with the kitten to look for another case as said cat went back to sleep curling itself into a furry ball to the right of me on the table next to my mouse. Which I was thankful for as when I tried to use the computer and move the mouse around the cat would attack my hand and bit at it and the cord.
As I started to look I found that dozens of criminals had been having heart attacks over the last week. Confused and intrigued I looked into multiple files on a few of the inmate's medical records to see if there was something wrong but nothing was there all were healthy up till their deaths.
I sighed as I started to go threw more and more files and like the others only two of the last dozen I checked had medical problems and neither of them involved the heart. I couldn't figure out what was happening to lead to how were they dying but I knew it wasn't normal.
As I sat there after looking threw a couple more files of records I began to wonder what was happening. It could be something like a large group of people could achieve but I doubt it you would have heard something by now. The chance of it being one person was slim to none with it being twelve percent at best.
But even then without knowing the cause it could be a new drug that worked without leaving a trace it was possible very much so but that couldn't be right who could someone have that range of people to help kill of that many people in so many areas. I can't make a guess right now I need more information to go on so time to do more studying.
After five hours I went threw all the deaths that could possible be murders and if there file was available to me I printed it and studied it with comparing them to other 'victims' and from what I could see there was no connection from one death to the next. I doubted there would be much of a revenge attack to many dead and unrelated so it was just whoever they could get to kill would die.
Next I checked the locations of where and when they died and found that when the kills happened a group died in around a minute of each other but usually they would have no connection some were even in other countries at the times of death. And that was another wrench in the how is it possible for one person.
But I did get as many leads as I did dead ends as I figured that who or whatever was doing this most likely would be in Japan. As most of the earlier killings were from that area and only later did it seeped around the globe so whoever was doing must have been testing out there killing method.
So the killer and or killers hasn't been active for long but they have been spending there time to kill to make up for that fact. I now have a good guess as to where they are but the question of how they kill isn't yet answered I have a guess but it most likely won't be right or only has to do with apert of the killing.
A name and a face but why does that matter you can kill without knowing either of those things but those whose name was shown but not the face was spared the same can be said with a face but no name. While this was good for me that if it came down to it I would be safe know one expect two people knew of my name and I knew without a doubt either would be this killer well ninety-eight point eight percent sure no one can be one hundred percent certain without real proof.
After that I lose the lead that I had and was searching on my computer to see if anyone online had any more information about what was going on. It didn't take long to find multiple web sites that talked about the killings and most said what this killer or Kira as people have begun to call him was doing was right.
It didn't take long to see where the name came from Kira meaning killer in japanese reinforcing the theory of them being in or from Japan. As I sat there I thought to myself about what I was going to do I couldn't just rush to japan no who ever is causing this is smart he hasn't made a big move that could cause me to get ahead of him but I would get him in the end.
I need to find a way to make sure that they are in japan and I need to find a way to provoke them into making a mistake that is all I need to bring them down just one mistake. I can't say that I'm to happy about this I hate when people think they're so much better than others to think there above the law.
But at least I got my wish this should be very interesting indeed. For now tho I need to focus this four questions until one takes priority over another or I find a new set of questions that need more attention. How does he kill are there more variables to killing than a name and face is Kira in japan and who is this Kira who thinks they are the law.
As I sat back slightly more than normal in my chair and contemplate what I was going to do next I heard a small sound to the next of me. Turning my head slightly to the noise I saw the kitten was stretching as most cats do when they wake up. A small barely noticeable smile appeared on my face as my new friend stood up and looked at me with its head cocked to the side slightly.
I raised my right hand and pet it on the head a few times after a moment I slide the bowl of milk that was laying absently to the side of my table in front of the cat. Once they noticed the milk they dropped there head and began to drink as much as they could the small smile began came a sad one as I watched the kitten act like this was the first time it had anything in a week and that I was about to take the bowl away.
Shaking away the thoughts I turned back to the computer and files that were spread everywhere on the table except the small corner that the cat and its bowl was. I held my leg closer to my chest as I revised everything taht I read and found so far but I couldn't figure out anything that would be of more use.
So what do you think of it so far I think I'll do a good job with the crimes and plot that goes along with that. I'm not going to write that much here as I wrote a lot at the top so I'll just leave it here ny saying I ma not going to be on a schedule like my last story while I will but it will be a lot more lack no chapter every two or four days that made my life harder than it need to be and burned me out of writing that story so this story will be one every two weeks at worst as I still want to write often. so it will not be that late on uploading all the time really it will be more like one a week but I want to have something to keep me pressured slightly so I don't slack off to much anyway I just realized hoe much I'm writing when I said that this would be short I'll end it see ya.