This is my first fan fiction. Please Read and Review. And correct any mistakes!
The Sleepover
It was ten fifty five at kings cross. Many muggles were looking at the two boys running with there trolleys up to platform nine and ten. These went ordinary boys, but in fact two of the infamous marauders, James Potter and Sirius Black. If they didn't hurry, they would miss the Hogwarts express.
James Potter was a handsome seventeen years old teenager. With his messy jet black hair and his hazel eyes, there was no other word for it. He was hot. Nearly every girl in Hogwarts wanted to be his girlfriend. Nearly.
Sirius Black was equally as hot. With his long black hair, and dark blue eyes (I made that up. Don't know the real colour. If u do, tell me!)
And masculine figure, he was well known as a player.
"1 minute left" said James very quickly checking his watch. "Yeh, then were screwed" said Sirius just as quickly. They looked around making sure no one was looking then they ran into the wall between platforms nine and ten.
There was only one door left opened, so they quickly ran to it. Onto the now moving train, they through their suitcases. Then some one came to close the door.
"Evans?" said James. "Potter." Said lily Evans surprisingly, then she smiled an evil smile. "Running late aren't we?"
"Only a bit" replied Sirius. "Can you stop with the chit-chat, and help us Evans?" asked James as the train started moving faster.
"Hemmmmm. That would be a hard choice. But I'm running late as well. I got to go see if the head boy has arrived yet. So Ill just leave you boys to it."
"Well you won't get very far seeing as the head boy is currently trying to get on to get on to the train!" said James hurriedly.
"What? Your head boy?" said lily sounding shocked.
"Yeah he is." Said Sirus as the train was just about to turn the corner.
Lily sighed. "Well, in that case, Wingardium Leviosa" (can't spell!)
The two boys instantly were levitated on to the train.
"Potter, you better hurry up. Were both late." Said lily, effortlessly.
"Thanks" James said sarcastically.
"Hurry up Potter. Were going to be late" said Lily as she marched off into the heads compartment.
"Attitude problem? Thank god you don't fancy her anymore. But that maybe would have carmed her down. Her loss, hur?" said Sirius.
"Yeah, maybe..." replied James as he followed Lily into the heads compartment.
I no it's not all that but bear with me! It's just the start and I promise its going to get better as the chapters get longer! And I'm not going to up date in till I get at lease 3 reviews from different people! So,
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