Chapter 1: the visit
Tim was watching football in the house. Mark was walking round listening to Good Charlotte. Jill was looking at paper from her clients. Brad went to college to become a soccer player. Randy was still in Costa Rica. In Detroit's airport Randy was there with his girlfriend Jamie,
"I'm very scared about this," said Jamie
"Don't worry I hope my parent takes this well" said Randy
"I hope so, can we see my dad and my stepmom"
"Do they like jokes?"
"Not really"
"Well this will be great"
At home Jill came in the living looking at Tim. Ever since Tool Time was off air, Tim made another hot rod and he watches the football channel.
"Tim you touch the sink"
"Yes I did, the water pressure needed more power"
"The water pressure was perfect"
"That's what you think"
Then someone was at the door. Mark walked over and he opened the door. It was Brad; he looked great he wanted to come see his family
"Brad" said Mark
"Hey Mark"
"Huh I can't hear you," said Mark with is headphones on
"Nice to see you" shouted Brad
"Huh"
Brad reached over his ear and pulled down this headphones
"Nice to see you"
"That's all you had to say.joking nice to see ya too"
Jill walked over to see her eldest son. Brad smiled when he saw her. Brad moved in closer to his mom, and they hug
"Brad nice to see you, I missed you so much"
"I missed you too"
Tim got up to see his son. Brad hasn't changed much. He grew a goatee, and his hair got like a dirty blonde.
"Brad you look excellent" said Tim
"Thanks, how are you?"
"Tool time was the best show"
"Dad let it go"
"Ok, I made another hot rod, you wanna work on it?"
"Okay, let me wash hands"
Brad went to the sink and he put on the sink and the water was splashing all of this face.
Meanwhile
On the way to Randy's parent's house, Jamie was looking outside of the car. Randy was watching Jamie; Jamie had a tear coming down on her face. Randy put his hand on hers and he looked at her.
"Don't worry, maybe my parent's can help"
"How do you know?"
"I know my parents like the back of my hand"
'I hope they will"
"Jamie are you okay"
"Huh uh I feeling terrible, my parent's don't want to be involve with this and sure I feel great" said Jamie with in a joking mood
"Glad to hear you're doing great" said Randy in a joking mood
"I just want to tell" said Jamie
"I know what you mean"
Please tell me what you think
~Rissa~
Tim was watching football in the house. Mark was walking round listening to Good Charlotte. Jill was looking at paper from her clients. Brad went to college to become a soccer player. Randy was still in Costa Rica. In Detroit's airport Randy was there with his girlfriend Jamie,
"I'm very scared about this," said Jamie
"Don't worry I hope my parent takes this well" said Randy
"I hope so, can we see my dad and my stepmom"
"Do they like jokes?"
"Not really"
"Well this will be great"
At home Jill came in the living looking at Tim. Ever since Tool Time was off air, Tim made another hot rod and he watches the football channel.
"Tim you touch the sink"
"Yes I did, the water pressure needed more power"
"The water pressure was perfect"
"That's what you think"
Then someone was at the door. Mark walked over and he opened the door. It was Brad; he looked great he wanted to come see his family
"Brad" said Mark
"Hey Mark"
"Huh I can't hear you," said Mark with is headphones on
"Nice to see you" shouted Brad
"Huh"
Brad reached over his ear and pulled down this headphones
"Nice to see you"
"That's all you had to say.joking nice to see ya too"
Jill walked over to see her eldest son. Brad smiled when he saw her. Brad moved in closer to his mom, and they hug
"Brad nice to see you, I missed you so much"
"I missed you too"
Tim got up to see his son. Brad hasn't changed much. He grew a goatee, and his hair got like a dirty blonde.
"Brad you look excellent" said Tim
"Thanks, how are you?"
"Tool time was the best show"
"Dad let it go"
"Ok, I made another hot rod, you wanna work on it?"
"Okay, let me wash hands"
Brad went to the sink and he put on the sink and the water was splashing all of this face.
Meanwhile
On the way to Randy's parent's house, Jamie was looking outside of the car. Randy was watching Jamie; Jamie had a tear coming down on her face. Randy put his hand on hers and he looked at her.
"Don't worry, maybe my parent's can help"
"How do you know?"
"I know my parents like the back of my hand"
'I hope they will"
"Jamie are you okay"
"Huh uh I feeling terrible, my parent's don't want to be involve with this and sure I feel great" said Jamie with in a joking mood
"Glad to hear you're doing great" said Randy in a joking mood
"I just want to tell" said Jamie
"I know what you mean"
Please tell me what you think
~Rissa~