Drawn to life crisis core pt 1: before crisis.
You all know hawk the Indiana Jones, chuck Norris, and superman to the raposa. But he wasn't the first hero. Defenders have been protecting the raposa since they first existed but only 1 raposa was evil, why did he do it, what happened before hawk? that is the story(a book opens and the screen goes white.).
Many years ago.
Rapo: this is insane, shadows are attacking the village.
Shows the mayor.
Mayor: yes perhaps the creator can help.
Creator: I can help, go to the engineer and tell him to make a steel skeleton.
Shows a raposa with glasses, purple goggles, and a blu shirt fixing a radio.
Johnson "Johnny" insert last name here.
The mayor enters.
Mayor: john, the creator says he can help we just need a metal skeleton.
John pulls one out of a closet.
John: I have a few skeletons in my closet.
Mayor: now what?
Creator: I will give color to its frame, movement to its joints, and life.
Green lightning hits it and ink covers it, then a bunch of metal and fabric attach on to it creating a gauntlet, boot things, 2 small boosters on the back, a bionic arm, and a soul case. The end result is a being that looks like hawk but with the green swapped with blue, a bionic arm, 2 boosters on its back, and visible eyes.
John: what the?
Being: im the new defender Dobak!
Mayor: thank you creator.
Creator: no prob.
Dobak: now to find those shadows.
A rapo enters.
Rapo: the shadows have taken Madeline!
John: oh no! dobak save her!
Later…
3 shadow walkers are shown carrying a sack and dobak enters.
Dobak: release her!
The shadows put the sack down and charge.
Annoying info box: press the b button to attack with your bionic arm. Use the a button to jump.
Dobak: this isn't a video game.
Dobak drops the shadows like a lead boat.
Sack: mfmjnfnjfhnfjmfh.
Dobak opens the bag and a female raposa with a flower in her hair, a pink shirt with a long purple skirt, and long brown hair comes out.
Madeline "maddie" tulip.
Maddie: aaahhh shadow!
Dobak: no im doback, I saved you,.
Maddie: oh sorry.
Later….
John: maddie your okay.
Maddie: thanks to dobak.
Dobak: why are shadows attacking?
Voice: because someone woke them.
A grey raposa with a blue shirt and a pony tail enters.
Mayor: wilfre this is dobak.
Wilfre: pleasure to meet you.
Dobak: me too miss.
Wilfre: im a guy.
Dobak: one with a ponytail.
Wilfre: I just came to say that some bakis took a rapo into the woods.
John: dang that's monkey turf.
Wilfre: dobak can catch them in the twilight woods. If he has wings.
John: those will take hours to make.
Creator: if dobak needs an item I could draw it.
Metal bat wings appear on dobak`s back.
John: one more thing(pulls out a lazer gun.) you will need this.
Dobak: im ready to go!
A1-1 twilight ground.
After flying and shooting dobak finds the bakis.
Dobak: let the rapo go.
Rapo: who?
Dobak: you
Rapo: AAAAAHHHHHH it's a demon !
Dobak: no im dobak.
Rapo: oh im not kidnaped im just bored im rapo j.
Rapo j "j"
Dr.j: hey sun glasses, jacket, green shirt with orange Q. he looks like me.
Later…
Dobak: I found the idiot.
Rapo j: hi.
Mayor: he was the rapo?
John: we could have just left him he's annoying.
Wilfre: his stupidity amuses me.
Everyone but dobak, john, and maddie leaves.
Maddie: see ya.
John: yeah….
Maddie leaves.
Dobak: you like her.
John: how'd you- yes but im too nervous to ask her out.
Dobak: I may be only 1 hour old but I know a little more about women than you.
John: but-
Dobak: I can tell you 2 will get married and have a son named Joey.
John: mabey, but I cant spell Jowee.
Dobak: me either.
Elsewhere…..
Wilfre: this is getting risky but wait if something where to happen to him, id have my .
Rapo j: what chance?
Wilfre: my chance at uuuhhh love.
Rapo j: okay(leaves).
Wilfre: that was close.
Hatz….
Issac: not again!
Mayor: what happened?
Issac: the monkeys did it again.
Mayor: maybe dobak can do something.
John: there is only one way into monkey turf and its guarded.
A raposa enters.
Rapo: there is another way.
Mayor: unagi.
Dobak: how?
Unagi: you trek through the twilight woods, then find a rocket that can take you over the monkeys.
John: I had a rocket prototype if dobak can find the blueprints in the woods I can build the rocket.
Dobak: great more work.
A1-2 twilight treetops.
After finding the blueprints dobak finds a raposa with a leaf and crazy eyes.
Dobak: hi-
Crazy barks:gghdfdfdreyhgfddedsw!
Dobak:0_0.
Barks: .
Dobak: that's better.
Later…
Dobak: I found a crazy rapo.
Barks: bark bark snarl ggggggrrrrrrrrr hhhiiiissssss meow.
Dobak: at least he used spaces.
John: now I can design a rocket.
Later….
Dobak: lets move!
Gwom: squadala!
Vehicle level 1: the sky boundries.
Dobak: everything looks so small.
Computer with attractive voice(aka cwav): in coming baki jets.
Annoying box: use a to fire and b to drop bombs.
The rocket shoots the ships down.
Dobak: glad that's over.
Then a hole opens in time and the futuristic space ship enters.
Dobak: oh come on.
Cwav: I suggest you(in peppy`s voice) DO A BARREL ROLL!
One fight later…
Dobak lands.
Dobak: ok im in.
Mayor over phone: find the monkey king and get him to sign the pact.
Dobak: fine.
A1-3 jangala village.
Dobak finds 2 fat young rapos stuffing their faces with bananas.
Dobak: guys coasts clear you can go.
Tubba: were eating.
Bubba: so move it.
Dobak shoves them into a bazooka and fires them back to the village.
Dobak: look a sign. Monkey king^. it is.
A1-4 the jangala climb.
After climbing half the way dobak finds a raposa getting beat.
Farmer brown: stop!
Shadow walkers: NEVAH!
Dobak shoots them.
Brown: I recon I be thanking you I recon.
Dobak: just go.
Dobak gives him a parachute.
Dobak: blue cord then green.
Dobak kicks him off.
Dobak climbs to the top.
Dobak: I can see brown from here.
Brown: im okay I recon.
Then a giant monkey jumps down.
Monkey: I AM THE MONKEY KING!
Boss: mad monkey master, the monkey king.
John over phone: make him hit himself and he will be mune to your attacks.
Dobak grabs the kings arm and hits him with it.
Monkey king: ouchie!
Dobak shoots the monkey king.
Monkey king: pain!
Dobak notices a rapo In a cage.
Dr. cure: help me.
Dobak grabs the cage and hit's the monkey king with it.
Cure/king: OOOOOOUUUUUCCCCCHHHHH!
Monkey king: I give up.
Dobak: then sign this pact saying that your monkeys wont steal from us.
Monkey king: ok.
Later…
the rocket lands and dobak and cure exit.
Cure: im back!
Brown: good I broke my arm.
Tubba and bubba: FFFFFFOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDD!
Mayor: that takes care of the monkeys.
John: I found out where the shadows are coming from.
Dobak: where?
John: There's a factory in the mainland dobak should-
Dobak: im taking the rest of the day off ill do it tomorrow.
Mayor: good point we do need rest and the returned rapos must be worried.
Shows barks biting tubba, bubba biting barks, and cure putting a cast on brown.
Dobak: im sleeping at your house john.
John: you get the couch.
Maddie enters
Maddie: hey what I miss.
Dobak: nothing nothing.
Mayor: im bored.
Mayor leaves.
Dobak: say maddie, I overheard Johnny here talking about if you wanted to go out with him.
John: well I-
Maddie: sounds fun tomorrow work?
John: see-
Dobak: he will pick you up at 7.
Maddie leaves.
John: what the creator did you do!
Dobak: the thing you where too wussy to do.
Rapo j sticks his head out of a shrub.
Rapo j: you are royally in poo.
Dobak: what?
Rapo j: shrub, good eats.
Dobak:0_0.
John: dobak: your sleeping in the basement.
Dobak: I guess I deserved this.
To be continued….
Author: im not racist toward Australia, I just hate they get the good stuff.