Hi! Uh...do I even have to say it? Yes, another Naruto poem! Man, I really need to get back to my fics! Well, anyway this is a Naruto and Hinata poem. It's partly inspired by my crush, or old crush I don't know if I like him still or not, it's complicated (he like insulted me the other day though, and I kind of wanted to cry, but I didn't). Anyway, enough about me, I hope you like this and I hope it portrays Hinata's feelings well.
Notice Me
When I see you
My head begins to spin
My heart pounds
I feel like I can't breathe
My face turns pink
I smile automatically
You look at me
I turn away
Trying to hide my face
You turn your head,
Confused,
And just look at her instead
I sigh to myself,
Thinking you'll never know
How I feel about you
Because I suppose to you
I'm just
An ordinary girl
I wish I was someone else
Anyone else
Then maybe you'll notice me
I wish I was stronger
Smarter, prettier
More dependable
More confident
Then maybe you'd notice me
I lie awake at night,
Thinking about you
I dream about you
You make me smile and laugh
You make me feel so blissful
But at the same time
You make my heart ache
I cry at night because of you sometimes
I feel unimportant, too
Because you never notice me
I just want you to notice me
You did once
I thought that meant maybe you care
But now I'm not so sure
I feel so confused sometimes
You cause all these feelings
At first I wasn't sure what they were
But I am now
I love you
I love you so much,
I can barely be near you
Because my heart beats so fast
And my head spins with all these thoughts,
I'm not sure what to say
I don't want to look weak or stupid in front of you
So I stay quiet, my shyness getting the best of me
I'm so nervous, and afraid
That you won't return my feelings
But I really just want you to notice me
And I know I'm not like her
I'm not perfect in everyway like she is
And I understand why you like her so much
She's smart, pretty, and strong
She's better than I am
That's why you notice her
Instead of me
I don't blame you for liking her
If you want her, then I think you should have her
I'll I really want is for you notice me
You don't have to love me, want me, or even like me
I just want you to notice me.
Notice Me.
Well, tell me what you think. I hope you liked it, I know it's not my best, but I still think it was okay. I hope I portrayed Hinata's feelings well. Please review, no flames, and arigato for reading it this far.
Sayonara