hi guys! It's my first fanfic. What do you think ?If you don't understand something write me. Leave your opinion below, i really need it.
Your Arekusei. And yeah i don't own adventure time.
Nowadays
Marcelin was lying on the ground, a girl with long brown hair hung over her, in her right hand she held an aspen stake directed right into the heart of the queen of vampires.
Marcelin held her hand with both hands, preventing her from inflicting damage on her. The vampire queen felt that her opponent was stronger and that the hand was getting closer and closer to her heart.
"The end of you, Queen of the Vampires." Finally, I will save this world from evil. - said the girl with the brown hair, she smiled wickedly anticipating the taste of victory. In her eyes burned the fire of excitement from the fight against evil. In the meantime, Marceline realized with horror that she had lost. Even her strength was useless against a man like Lin. The vampire remembered how long ago they had fought together with the robbers and mutants, and now her best friend will kill her. However, one more thought did not give rest to the Vampire Queen - why her ability to turn into any beast suddenly disappeared. Perhaps right now she would have helped her.
Another attempt turned out to be useless, the peg was a few inches from the skin of a girl like ...
The white lynx pounced on Lin and threw her aside. Then she declined and turned into a not tall man with a small black mustache, with horns on his head, and large ears. He was wearing a warm brown sheepskin coat, a balalaika was hanging on his back, he was shod in black boots.
High priest! - exclaimed in surprise Marceline, the girl could not understand how he could get free, but now she understood where her power had gone.
And where is the thank you? - asked the hierophant feignedly offended. He looked at the girl cheerfully and added. - Well, and why should I save you after that?
What do you want? - asked Marcelin angrily, - Do not think that you will succeed in defeating me, I will not allow you to drink the blood of innocent creatures ...
*Знаешь, но я завязал с этим, больше никакой крови - The vampire calmly replied, shrugging. He looked like the wounds on the Vampire Queen's skin healed quickly, and add:
**Не отвлекайся нас ожидает битва, потом поговорим. "The High Priest reminded her about Lin."
Wait, what did you say? - asked Marcelin, uncomprehendingly, she looked with surprise into the eyes of her savior trying to understand the meaning of what was said. Hierophant thought.
Did I say something wrong? He asked, tilting his head to the left.
You said in another language, I do not understand you. - said Marceline. The man in the sheepskin paused for a moment, stroked his mustache, and then slapped his forehead with his palm.
Oh, yes, you don't understand Russian, but I'm thinking ... The man didn't finish, he quickly turned into a brown bear and ran forward. The girl hissed, sticking her tongue out of her mouth, and prepared to attack the vampire. But much to Marcelin's surprise, he ran alongside and then attacked the brown-haired girl who had started moving a few seconds back. They grappled with their hands, trying to knock the enemy off their feet, the vampire loosened his grip, allowing the opponent to move forward. After that, he broke the grip, Lin began to fall, the Vampire hit her with his huge shaggy paw, throwing her far ahead.
Hey, you could kill her! Shouted Marcelin, watching her friend fly, and then hit the ground with a crash.
Isn't she an enemy? - asked surprised bear in broken english.
No, said Marceline quietly, holding back tears in her eyes," she was simply influenced by the spell, she would never harm me. "
Okay, I'll try. Well, maybe you will explain me how it all happened? The High Priest asked, turning into himself. The girl was silent for several minutes and said:
It all started because of the simple desire of my friend to become stronger ...
*No more blood
** Do not be distracted, we still have to deal with her first.