This is my first Lorien Legacies fanfic, so please read and review, and I'd be really grateful for any advice given. Also this was previously left in a bad unedited state so don't worry I'm fixing that.

They caught Number One in Malaysia, her legacies given to a Mog.

1

Adam

Its night and I'm driving, we had only just got out of the building, but even I couldn't spot any Mogs and I knew how they hid their looks. That was bad.

I glanced across at Four he'd been silent since we left only saying we should get out of the city and he'd contact Sam, Malcom and Sarah. I couldn't wait to see them I've been worried about Malcom and his son since I left them in the prison.

I noticed Four rub his ankle again.

"I felt it too you know''.

Four looked up his face a mask of pain ''Do you have any idea who it is''.

''No''.

He sighed and turned away to look out the window.

"What changed you?'' he asked quietly.

"One did, they trapped me in her memories for three years my own family my 'friends'. She showed me what they did to the Loric; you see were basically spoon fed everything we know. She was with me for some time in my head, I know it sounds mad but when I wanted to quit, leave all the wars and things behind, she pushed me".

"What was she like?"

"Hmm, let's leave it at determined".

He let out a small laugh, and silence resumed.

Suddenly Fours phone rang; he quickly picked it up and answered it.

"Directions from Sam, take the next left and then a quick right".

Four/John

After getting lost a couple of times we finally arrived at an abandoned farmhouse. I jumped out of the car creating a small fireball in my hand as I did so just in case.

''Sam, Malcom?" Adam called.

''Adam?'' someone answered.

"Sarah" I cried as I rushed in.

"You're ok "she said hugging me tightly" I didn't know what to do if you- if you were hurt".

"I'm fine, don't worry".

"Sorry to break in guys but we got to get out of here like now".

"Adams right lets go".

I opened my eyes to see Sarah face beside me, she was frowning slightly in her sleep but she still looked beautiful to me. I got up slowly trying hard not to wake her and crept over to my chest and opened it.

Sifting through my things, I took out the tablet and turned it on, one blue dot on the edge of the highway and three hovering on the edge of California, one less, they must know about the attack somehow. I could see no sign of the other two dots at all, who had died?

Ella, Sektracus Ra, even the thought that the leader of the Mogs could be Loric sickened me, how could he have done that to his race of people. I quickly shoved the tablet back into my chest and grabbed an energy bar from my pack.

I walked out onto the balcony to find someone already there Adam. I still felt nervous about being around him; after all he is a Mog. But I trusted him more since what he told me last night.

"What you doing out here "I asked him.

''Thinking, and before you ask nothing in particular".

''Ok but I was just wondering what are your legacies, Malcom told me you had some but no offence I didn't really believe him ''.

"Don't blame you, well I can kind of make earthquakes and things like that, I was the one who brought down the Dulce base.

"Really that was you'' I felt my mouth gaping a little ''we had no idea what was happening we thought it was Ra or something''.

The moment the words left my mouth, Sam burst out onto the balcony.

"John come here quick! There's something in your chest, it's beeping like crazy!".

I ran in quickly followed by Adam and raced over to where Malcom was crouched over my chest. I flung the lid open, greeted by a pulsing light coming off the tablets screen, I scooped it up, on the screen, there was the same thing as before but suddenly it seemed to scroll down and I was staring at somewhere in Brazil, a small but clear blue dot was hovering there and I had a feeling deep in my gut that this was not a Loric I knew yet.